The Veil of Aetherion - Reviews

nice, i like your storyyy!

this looks like a harem? the mc has so many annoying girls around him and he is also getting turned on by a woman whose age can pass as his mom! so I'll drop this!

READ THIS COMMENT BEFORE YOU START READING THE NOVEL:The novel isn't finished. If there were even just 10 more chapters the author would be able to give a rough finish, BUT for some reason(I assume issues with the publisher) the final chapters are either missing or were never written. Chapter 2258 isn't the final chapter. There's a ton of stuff that needs to happen and if you read it only to 2258 you will feel really disappointed because almost everything interesting that you as a reader were expecting to find and was being dragged for 1000-1500 chapters you won't be able to read. Chapter 2257 literally covers 3 important stuff that got dragged anywhere from 500-600 chapters to 1000+.The novel is decent, but without a finale that gives you as I said the most important parts it's pointless.I saw someone wrote that it has 2286 chapters which would be enough to finish it, heck even 10 chapters a I said would be enough, but it never got finished or at least I can't find any translations past 2258.I know that some would hate the publisher since I assume money was involed and the publisher and the writter couldn't settle, but if I have to point at someone I'd say the author is more at fault... how can you stop 10-20 chapters before the ending... DISAPPOINT!!!Also it's beyond me why this novel is marked as COMPLETED when honestly with this finale it's not different than not reading it.

I like this story and how the author write it. I can imagine and feel the story. So this is a great one. There need some improvement, but overall this is great.

It really is questionable how something like this gets picked. The story is extremely rushed and full of cliches and based on the ratings (I know that ratings aren´t meant to be taken seriously here, but still) noone seems to like this novel. Trial reads are truly useless. The good ones get dropped while the bad ones get picked and eventually, they also get dropped because noone´s reading that garbage.0 / 5

unique story about rise of reincarnation hero and time travel individual in mmorpg game and real world ?????????????????????

This story is quite addictive. I love the characters and the plot.Great story author

It happened concurrently. Two men could be seen running through the plains of ash, barefooted. The word painful, barely describing what they felt. Coupled with flames, one that surrounded their every corner, their skin had long since withered.

"No, Rylan. Sa tamang panahon." Sabi ko rito dahilan para kumunot ang noo nito.

Chapter titles/headings don't really need to be all capitalized...

She struggles a bit to undo her skirt first, but went to undo her top first which I see her purple bra with a nice dark fiery pattern on as she takes her skirt off for me to see her matching panties which had a bit of sling on the side to remove with ease

"Whatever. I really did have fun with your sister and her friends last night though. Actually, I believe it may have been the best time of my life. I don't think I ever had that much fun before. I would have loved to invite you too if I knew about it too," Harry winked.