THE UNTAMED PLAYBOY - Reviews

I like the layout and the storyline of this and there are a few grammar errors but other that all that it's a good novel and you should definitely update it more

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Ey whassup it's your boy Tobi here gonna do a review!Well, there aren't that many chapters yet but Tobi thinks it has potential to grow!Just don't be lazy Author!

Writing quality is pretty disappointing. The premise is interesting and I believe that this novel certainly could be good. It’s just I can’t deal with the amount of mistakes and choppy sentence structure. I understand that your first language probably isn’t English and as such I’m still giving you a decent review. People obviously like your work so keep at it. :)

paid from the start and its just the same chapter 24 times

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Skill: Teleportation,Portal, Summoning, Satanic Spell, Insanity, Calamity, Dark Healing, Self Regeneration

Vegeta:" hahaha... Kakarot this little human called you weak haha..haha".

The black tyrannosaur roared loudly in pain, and as gravity finally hit me my body slammed heavily onto its head. It was a miracle that I still had a grip on its eye socket, but I knew I wouldn't be able to hang on for long. I heard Kitty growl and she rammed into the Rex twice her size sending it stumbling a few feet slamming into trees. I swung my arm and grabbed onto the upper eye lid of  the Rex's remaining eye.

All the other three members took out their cellphones and started searching. Then they all became pale. Finally, the leader, Nu Yoon-Ji, blasted.

"Child to despise this world? "

And by the way, WHAT THE HELL IS REALLY HAPPENING???