The Unstoppable Assassinator - Reviews

I like reading Kingdom building novels and when this novel started I thought this was one of the best KB novels on web novel  but recent chapters has been a huge let down. reading till chapter 350, the MC comes from a modern world yet has not shown any progress when handling diplomacy. I mean the way author has shown how diplomacy is handled by Riz or Rythium kingdom is very basic, even having a minister and ministry to handle external affairs they have not shown professionalism or handled things properly post war. Also why has author neglected the Spy network when crucial information about war and certain things have not been passed back to kingdom, the Inver issue was handled badly. Also the way war was won by being lucky is kinda let down. Hopefully author improves these things ( read other kingdom building novels if you have to).

                        Princess Zoha Isabella Dominic bows before you in gratitude for looking after the kingdom after the demise of King Xavier Dominic, The Great. Today, I,....have requested your presence in is for the declaration of a National Emergency. And I would like to inform you that the Alliance between King Ivan of the High Blue-Ray kingdom and Princess Zoha of the Eternal Zolhain kingdom through marriage has been called off. Since the nation demands a ruler...I, Zoha proclaim myself as the Self-Crowned Queen of the Nation. The Coronation will take place within 2 days."

"Few people know me with that name, so who are you?"

First  day it was quite manageble. But felt little a bit uneasy to sleep that night so had lot of water to fill my stomach. Second day morning i started feeling  tired, i mostly stopped using my energy and spent most of the time to distract myself by keep on drawing linga images or praying. With each hour being passed, it was becoming more and more difficult to keep up. But somehow i pushed myself not to give up, cause this is my last chance, if i miss it then i have to continue in Arts & Science degree.

"Worry not Dr. banner, he did not overtake your body. You are in control, I just extended your consciousness deeper".

With his meager vitality, it would only take 1 attack for a wolf to empty his Hp bar.

Affects

Before passing through the turnstiles still looks strange, they do not bother to see their credentials very carefully and did not seem so foolish as to prevent the passage and question,

"Hello, Miss. What brings you here?" She opened the door fully hiding the knife.

Now then," Seras said to them, "I think we have spent enough time here. For today we still have another challenge for you. We have a special training area that you will pass. We call it the Labyrinth."

Well , A solid starting ground , for a prologue .The kind that keeps the reader craving for more , it keeps those strides of mystery mingling.I've taken a liking into it , Keep for more , just you need to separate paragraphs into smaller ones  , because it seems as if reading an article not a novel , Just for some professionalism .keep it up