The Unseen Colors of Mana: White Eyes - Reviews

I don't think that there was something bad with your story. It was a nice story and I think that the others were thinking the same too. Anyways, I hope that you will keep writing it and reach your goal with the story!

Another Novel from one of our famous author of culture, MyLittleBrother.Even his username is a cultural pun ! Do not underestimate his little brother.

Only read this if you want to lose all of your brain cells.

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published by dog and I felt powerful in a det to the right of my life I was in the same as I was wrong and the grass is so I left it was a good friend to me but the glitched

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An entertaining novel to read while killing time, I love the lemon scene and it makes my lower body tense ?, come on author, I'm waiting for the update

The novel's idea and world are very interesting, not to mention the addition of astral beasts; at first, it was nice to see a novel where the father wasn't dead or made useless, only to let the MC end up with their mother. Sadly, this happens, and all development toward a balanced family ends. There is no inc*st tag, but there will be some, which isn't my thing. The characters are alright; the women feel like carbon copies of each other because of the scent thing, and all fall for him easily, but the MC himself is interesting and has a very dynamic difference in his two sides and should interest anyone who reads for sure.The power system lacks depth, suffers the same as LK, and is wishy-washy at best. While the action is average, it has some good parts despite being weaker than many current novels.As for writing, quality remains the same as LK, and there is little improvement between the two. The usage of italics also makes it difficult to read, but it's better than many novels on WN, so give it a read while you’ve nothing to do. There are a lot of good ideas countering the negative.

"What the hell is this? I can understand the counterattack and gaining the attention of others but why! Oh why! Do I have to get punished by such a large number of lashes?" Roland exploded.

(Libby)

Years ago their was a wonderful girl her name was Consuelo. Her mother didn't know to read or spell and her father didn't know either. Both parents name was Cecilia Pech and Herman Lazaro.  Consuelo was a active girl her parents had 14 children. One day one of her brother was drunk and broked her mother's cup and her mother started to shout at him. But he told his mother that cup you are fighting here is the buy another one and his mother told him that she doesn't want the money.  And he told his mother so you are telling me that i am not welcome in your house.  So he walked out and his mother told him I hope that when I get to know of you they would tell me they find you death like a dog. So he walk away and told one of his brothers that if he doesn't come back that the house where he life will be for him and that same day was Consuelo's birthday. After 6 day a man came asking for Mr. Herman because the have find his some Machi death in the Cane field.  Years with by and everything changed Consuelo mother used to put her to wash and cook but one day Consuelo burnt the beans and her mother pull her of her hair and nocked  her against the wall.  As days went into years everything was the same Consuelo got tired and got married at the age of 14 with a boy of almost her age she thought that was the only way of get out of her house and stop suffering. Her husband name was Oscar at the age of 16 she had her first child name Cristal it was a cute adorable baby but everything changed as well Oscar started to drink and used to beat her she had 2 more children with him but one day she met a old man who everyone called Don.Wero and told her why she supported Oscar to beat her if she is such a beautiful girl. So decided to run away she went on live in chetumal and started to work then she met man who's name was Adan she got in a relationship with him and had to lovely children And ran waya from Veracurz . she stared a new live in her contury and got into another relationship had one kid. she left the man because he cheated on her.after 8 years she met another