The Unseen Adventure - Reviews

Waiting for when Clarisse will tell Christian that her memory is back ...

Finally, been waiting so long for this to be continued. Its a great reincarnation story, good character development and an interesting world. It's been too long, can't wait to finish it

I'm finding this book really hard to get into as the premise of it all is so sht. The whole reason for everything is basically he didn't complete his father's dream so he felt guilty af, resulting in a slump, his mother was disappointed in the mc for not following his father's dream resulting in them distancing themselves. He goes back and decides to complete his father's dream instead and goes from there. It is repeatedly mentioned how bad it was because he didn't follow his father's dream. To me, this is so sht and just rly hard to get into. As the mc did nothing wrong, he just made rly bad business decisions and surrounding himself with the wrong ppl. He followed his dream and now this is made out that it was the wrong thing to do and that he should have just followed his father's dream instead. You shouldn't force your child to do what you want... let him have his own dreams. Now, this whole story is about him completing his father's dream and correcting his mistake of following his own dream instead. This is just such a bad way to build the foundation of your story on and is rly hard for me to immerse myself as I dunno, it's just bad thinking.  

If you fed wuxi and xianxia books to a ai and had it make it's own book at least that would be interesting. This is literally copy paste generic of generic plot. Gj author way to be original or put your own spin on it.

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This story is definitely a wonderful read. The author delivers his promise on a villain protag. The translation is also well done. I have only noticed few errors, average 1 every 2 chapters or so. Well done translator.

Fun and he doesn’t keep a low profile which is the source of much annoyance in other novels.. also his system is heaven defying but he doesn’t immediately recieve the highest level spirit root but has to work at it.. the translation is good if a bit stunted at times but there are no obvious mistakes.. more please

This isn't xianxia nor it is a western take of xianxia. This is more Avatar The Legend of Korra if people know what that means. It is still readable and enjoyable, but the story really has zero dignity and is full of western garbage.

Yet another reincarnated MC who is an idiot, plot holes everywhere, Super powerful one minute and pathetically weak the next.

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I didn't think that this novel would be so good. I started to watch american football only at the beginning of this season (I'm not american), so I'm very interested to read anything about it, but quality of your writing is very good. I like the plot so far. A very competent kid, who doesn't have anything and wants to get out of the streets and a kid who was born lucky and has everything. Perfect story and a good rivalry through the school, college and league in the future.

I really liked your content keep it up Waiting for next chapterPlease upload it sooner ?☺️I loved your detective characterI read the starting chapters for like 5 times