the unloved twin - Reviews

Just one chapter today dear author?

Two cryptic but fascinating characters. I can't wait to find out how their story will evolve and, above all, their revenge.

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Just because of all those petty people that are dissatisfied that their novel wasn't the one to come out... This isn't such a bad novel that it deserves one star, especially when you haven't read it and only mark it so out of spite. Just wait another week if your novel hasn't come out yet, the world doesn't revolve around you, more people just wanted to read this novel. So suck it up and don't give rating just because of dissatisfaction.

Get a  editer it seems like it was run through Google translate. The words are rather jumbled and attempt at simile and metaphors are tricky to decipher. Gender words should be considered as reference to a species. Also the word larva was mistaken as ladies.

Let's get this story to the top 10, where it belongs! The writing is so well made, I can clearly tell how much the author invests in each individual chapter.The protagonist is one of those rare, *****/slightly silly. I enjoy reading his monologues and I find myself relating better to characters such as himself. As for the male lead? Where do I even start? An all powerful Spirit King = Absolutely clueless, senseless man. He's adorable!I'm glad I chanced upon this novel, I'll definitely be handing my power stones for every chapter released.*cough* Moar chapterz plz *cough*

Hi,This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “System Nemesis”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected], then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail.It was a great pleasure to meet your story.SincerelyTynan

"Bad news is when you receive or heard something not nice." He explains.

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pude sentir el cambio instantáneo, si me vuelvo actor creo que obtendré el óscar.

Ohgi frowned and walked over, followed by Inoue and Kallen. "What is it?"

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