The Ultimate Deity System: Lord of All Realms - Reviews

Not a terrible concept, but your grammar leaves much to be desired. Consider taking a few days off to edit your entire story. Also consider creating a table of contents and/or an addendum of power levels.

Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.

Whoa!!I really find this book interesting..I hope for more!!More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.

I usually don’t even review.. so takes mine as gospel ?Jokes aside. So far so good definitely seems like it’s finna have massive potential and a huge world.. so look forward too that.. Also Fox is actually one of the few decent writers on this app. Especially when it comes to making a true villain like character.. I would also recommend you read his other work Now I’m not gonna lie if you don’t like true villians, and I’m not talking about those fake villians.. this story might not be for you cuz Fox makes his portags extra extra evillll ?

Lachlan really couldn't get enough of this so-called king; he really placed himself on such a high pedestal. Placing him above heroes, people that were supposed to be world saviours and whatnot.

Kyle paused for a second to check Anne reaction before continuing his story. Anne looked shocked cause all this stuff was the event that happened at her previous life so that could only mean that Kyle knew about her rebirth or Kyle was reborn just like her but what could have led to his death but she just pushed the thought away and waited for Kyle to continue his story

"This is a form that needs to be filled out, after full fill, Young Master can submit to me"

I knew the Plaza like the back of my hand. These were directions I had gotten to know over the many times I'd eaten here. Turning my head to the side, I glanced to make sure she was beside me and noticed the way our steps synced in the process.

I took a look around and found a large grin appear on my face. This looks exactly like a Japanese hot spring from anime that I had seen back when I still was on Earth. I walked over to an small area that had buckets and a old fashioned pump. I filled the bucket up with cold water, and dumped it over my head and down my body. I repeated this a few times until I felt like I was clean enough to enter the hot spring. I walked over and set my towel and robe in a pile a few feet from the edge and slid slowly into the water, letting out a sigh full of contentment, I leaned back and simply let myself enjoy the ambiance. As I was laying there relaxing, I suddenly heard giggling from the other side of the wall. No way! Is this the legendary girl talk in the hot springs from anime, where they talk about the main character and how awesome he is, and who he might be into? Yeah like that's gonna happen to me..

honor is all mine...I saw what you did back there "

Jade smiled over at him before listening to the conversation again.

Nurseperson push me on the chair and open my wrapped clothes.