The two Omegas {BL} - Reviews

Hello everyone, author here. I'd just like to say thank you for all the support. Honestly, the story just went from having a few readers to getting much more. I know full well that I may not be the idle author - some may like how I write and some may dislike it. At the end of the day, it's your choice. I love writing too much to be bothered by that sort of thing. Honestly, it would not surprise me if majority of the readers get annoyed. I don't want to write something common and predictable. I want to write and love to write things that are harmonious and chaotic at the same time - that what I hope for at least. As I've said before, I'm unorthodox and a bit nuts in the head.[Sorry about that] ;pOnly thing I want is constructive criticism, things that will make me better and hopefully the story as-well.  Or just post about the things that you didn't like/ obvious errors and such. I read every comment you guys post, go ahead and flame me for that matter, I'll filter out the good from the bad and hopefully make something even better for you guys instead. P.S: I've gone back and slowly begun rewriting the previous chapters; bear with me and hopefully one day, we can all laugh about this journey. (Shout out to the people who were here from the beginning, I love you all and promise to become better.)

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Too many 'Updates' and Q&As.                                                                                                                        

Author please do note that providing false information in your title is just wrong....This novel isn't reincarnation it's about time travelling(from present to past).

I’ve been seeing a couple of reviews bashing the mc for being to cautious or not having the demeanor of an immortal cultivation and my reply to that is people like that won’ last a second in the cultivation world where a father can kill his child for talent or a mother can sell her child for benefits and keep in mind the mc has the biggest benefit that any cultivator chases that is eternal life, so yes he will hide and take his time, yes he won’t have the demeanor of an immortal cultivator and yes he is for sure not going to get himself killed and refined into a pill just so he can prove he is a big boy that everyone needs to respect and eternal life makes you a hermit by default because all those you care about will die and live you alone so excuse the mc for just chilling in the prison.Now for the proper review: the story is actua quite interesting and has an mc with a good head on his shoulder as well as a not so outrageous cheat which makes it all the more fun to read but the only problem I have with the story is the translation some words I have no idea what them mean because they are in Chinese and I just have to brush past it but I’ some chapters the translator provides the meaning at the end so that good…..well that’s the end of my review. Apologies if it is to amateur

This is the tale of a yet another sociopath whose whole pursuit in life is mostly strength. And in pursuit of it, He can forsake everything else and do any immoral acts. He feels no guilt at selling off his comrade at the expense of new informations. He feels no familal love either. Although, he is indeed evil, but he feels no need to harm others if it isn't for the sake of benefit. He also has a set of hobbies, such as reading for peace of mind. The power system is quite similar to Gu system from "Reverend Insanity" with few unique quirks. The plot follows a consistent way with no noticeable loopholes. The side characters and important ones all have a character unique to them, and quite sensible ones too. The plot isn't growing too fast and every action of our protagonist and others is descriptive and follows a logical sense. Edit: One thing I forgot to mention is that most of the side characters are, inevitably, equally or more evil than him. I have yet to see a single saint.

Author why is the mc so timid? I really hate when others authors make their mc-s like this, mc in your novel had a tough life, so he should be able to man's up and don't act like a pu..y,bad novel bad novel bad novel etc.

So happy. I'm loving this story.  Thank you author. They finally met and are so going to give us so much drama???????????????????????????????????

Hey please update the discord link its expired ?️

honestly 1 of the most interesting books I've been reading so far. I love the book and its uniqueness and i hope u keep doing your amazing work dear writer and keep the amazing writing till the end ! :). Wish you all the best and to many just as amazing books where you will get even better at writing than now !

Love it Love it Love it!I wanna read more about Lyle and what he does next!Keep it up author-san!I kinda suck at writing reviews, so this will have to do :P            

This novel is far from perfect. Its main selling point is a fairly well done overpowered female protagonist. On the other hand, its main weaknesses are a terrible sense of blind Chinese nationalism, the weirdly stupid mind games that all the characters face, as well as the complete lack of research the author has done on any of the subjects presented in the novel.I first began reading this novel both because of the amazing review score it had, as well as for a cross-dressing protagonist. The story starts off quite well, with a female lead who dies in her own world but is pulled into reincarnating into a future world because of a "grandpa teacher"-like spiritual entity inside her mind. It continues on to quite hilarious descriptions of her mother and the other characters around her as she slowly progresses through life pretending to be a boy in order to be able to inherit her father's inheritance and legacy.The characters in the novel, up to the point I've read, are quite interesting. They're all varied in personality and working through their own motivations as they interact with our heroine Ling Lan. We have an overbearing mother character, a kind grandpa figure who's also a hidden ninja, a stupid yet competent AI assistant, as well as a wide range of friends that collect around her. Yet the most interesting character is still the MC Ling Lan, who despite being an incredibly talented girl pretending to be a boy, only has the single objective of having a normal life and ultimately giving birth to the most talented child possible.Another aspect of this author that I really like is her skill in describing battles. The author has a natural talent for describing and directing melee fights between individuals. While there isn't much focus on any actual martial arts or actual techniques, the author still does a good job with understanding the capabilities and physical limits of the human body and expressing the fights as a natural and fluid manner. However, at the same time, the author is quite terrible at understanding the limitations of non-human entities.This brings me to one of the main areas where the author has been negligent - her research into science fiction. This is undoubtedly a science-fiction work, but this novel does nothing more than throw around the jargon without understanding what any of it actually is. Ling Lan's "AI Assistant