The Twelve Heroes - Reviews

I see a writeup with bright future here. you are doing well , the story development is okay, it captivated me at first sight, but the only downside to your work is the lack of a stable update. you should try and improve in your updates. howbeit, this is a great work.i'm looking forward to seeing the writer and his novel improve.

As usual shameless author review here. I’m new as an author so mistakes are bound to happen, but don’t worry I will definitely improve as times goes by. So critics are welcome!  i look forward to your support, and suggestions.

Fantastic SCP/LotM type with more Slice of Life op MC added in

author are you kidding me? what are you doing extending chapters like you are gonna write 10000 . you are making it soo boring . even though im holding my anger back its so annoying . mc is weak af. i thought there was multiple planets, which means there is 100 star people. mc is struggling at 3 star. something that needs 2 chapter max is extended to 20 chapter..... the h is this

That was all basic fighting style and within Nil's expectation.

When this was all done, he would make sure Delacroix had something nice and shiney to add to her collection at home to show her how much he appreciated her.

Father is coming eh? Great, another thing I have to deal with. Asshole.

Staring at the door, Shirou realized that he could hear voices coming from the other side due to the sensitivity of his hearing.

I remove my covers and I slide off my bed to stand up, Griffin stood next to me. He begins to blush when he sees me in my PJs.

"I'm sorry that my advancement put both of you in this situation, let me help!" Zhang Wu Ji changed the eight limbs of his Zitian Umbrella and channeled a surge of fresh Natural Qi into the weaponry.

JK (letting out a deep sigh): You know what Y/N I'm really thankful to our fate that we met talked and you cleared everything out. I'm not mad at you or its not like that that I want you back in my life anymore. I got over you. You know how because I got such 6 hyuns to look after me who love me, care for me, who are not only my band mates but also my family, a part of my life and also those millions of A.R.M.Y.s out there who love me for no reason taught me how to love myself, to be myself.

It all started with my birth. I was born in South Africa to two Arabian parents on 8/5/2000( August 5, 2000), and they raised me alone as there was no family that wasn't a plane trip but the neighborhood in which I grew up in was pretty friendly and helped my parents my rasing me.