The Timekeeper: The Crimes of Ardentis. - Reviews

could you please publish Harry's story in this platform

Petition to bring back "I Can See the Lines of Fortune"! A wonderful story to try, especially now that pocket hunting dimension is over. An all around interesting read! Please resume the translation of it! (Trying this as it worked for World of Deities)

NANI???? The fuuck happened here I was reading it and suddenly all the chapters were gone......... deleted. What happen did the author delete it or webnovel removed it.Psss low rating because of no chapters.

AS of chapter 70 Ther are many in My opinion major Problems with this novel. First IT Just jumps without any explanation to you could say a Modest 25 chapter Long Linda Fan-Fic one piece Story .After that where Back to the original Story that trys to answer way the 25 chapter happen't.Then there is the problem of complete Texts getting Copy Paste't From previous chapters in the novel .There easy to Spot because some Times they Talk AS If stuff that is Long gone is still Happening (the Demon Event).If the Problems i found don't geht fixed , im sorry but i'm going to drop this as it  will be unreadable.

Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Such a great novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Started out strong and then dropped off like a continental shelf.Essentially a simping novel where the MC gets treated like shit the entire time. This might be a good novel for those of you with inner masochistic tendencies.Pacing is horrible, translator cant even get the genders right (shitty as usual), and MC is unappealing.Trash novel. ‘Nuff said.

Wow so manu have happened after Season 10. I miss all of them specially Ye Xiu. Wish they would have  novel about the World International Championship, would love to read how it would be told.

World Gate Online is one of my favorites????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

If you are looking for a tbate clone this is the book for you. But to be completely honest you’d be better rereading tbate. It doesn’t have a majorly different plot, so you basically already know everything that is gonna happen. Also it doesn’t do anything better than tbate only worse. The pacing is very off. It will introduce pieces of the plot that happened in tbate but it won’t go into nearly as much detail or spend as much time on it. Like the academy. Nothing substantial happens at the academy. It is like Hi ADADEMY time!! Ohhh they had classes 1 year later bad thing happens and academy ends. However, even though I have been dragging this book through the mud it isn’t a bad book. I mean I read it, but it just set my standards too high by comparing it to tbate. Like it has the plot elements and characters similar to tbate, but it doesn’t have the essence of what makes tbate tbate. Tl;dr: It shouldn’t of tried so hard to be like tbate, but still miss the mark.

Honest review time! 1. Writing Quality is great. I didn't find any difficulty in understanding what author wants to convey. 2. Updates are stable. No issue there. 3. Story Development is fine too. I don't see serious issues there. It has a touch of mystery which has been handled quite well. 4. Okay, character designs have some problems. First of all, I don't know how Zachary and Odette look in general and how they look in different scenes. They are good characters, but they feel a little empty, of course, it could be due to author using two MCs instead of one due to which each of them didn't get proper screen time. 5. World Background has not been fleshed for now. But giving 5 stars because it is only the beginning. Overall, it's a good novel with engaging mystery and even depicts mental illness which only a few dares to explore

Wonderful! It's nicely paced, the writing flows well. I love how the first three chapters conveyed this sense of motherly love for Malaki from his mother. It was absolutely well written. So immersive that you can feel a bit of sympathy for a fictional character. Lovely!

Sounds of crickets' chirp echoed in the red sky.