So gaming stories aren't really my thing but I will say this story was quite enjoyable. Really liked the plot (although I wish the blurb had been written better - it really undermines the story) and characters were amazing. I'm really curious about how the two characters are going to get on.Grammar was okay but there were times it was a little messy with missing punctuation and capital letters. Otherwise, I'm excited to see where this author takes this story.
I despise people who write a good review before even reading a novel, but now I have to do it too. To be fair I won't give it a five.Anyways, you deserve a 4-star, just by having a single fl, not having a harem is already a rare occurrence lol. I'll write a normal review later after reading some chapters, maybe after 50.
Good story but I doubt we will see the system before the 40 chapters are done and I think the world background needs to be more detailed but other then that pretty good
They returned back to the boss. I spent this time skipping rocks in the fountain. Serenity tanned in the sun beside me. I actually managed to skip a pebble six times! But Serenity wasn't impressed.
"Oh, he's easy to track." Fury admitted breezily, "He'severywhere. New York, London, Seoul, Sokovia, Washington D.C., Los Angeles. Guy's multiplying faster than a catholic rabbit. Still doesn't help us get an angle on any of his plans though."
