The thorn that Peirces me - Reviews

Love this book! Im in love with isekai, and first time this is a isekai in the western world so it is more relatable! Hope to see more uploads soon!

Amazing start! I want more! I wish there were more novels just like yours.. nvm, I'll just wait for more chapt :DDDDDDDI am expecting some cool/badass summons ( like a tank/truck, or an airplane)

Okay it seems I will be the author's first.Let's see. The story goes off interestingly, maybe the author could make the flow go smoother int he beginning of the first chap, but out of that I didn't see any mistake.Grammar great, plot amazing, world build is still waited. Now we only need to wait what will happen.Good job dear... Author!:)

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Waited till now to write this review. By far the best fiction I've read in a while. It's written well and I love the MC. Villain novels are my favorite since they don't incorporate oblivious MC's. This MC's cool, level-headed and doesn't make rash decision. Author literally wrote an amazing premise to keep the story rolling. Don't forget about us when you get famous Akito!

"Good, do you Jin swear to uphold our values and protect the Pack above all else? Swear to look down on prejudice formed by strength and fight for those weaker than ourselves?"

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     "Jadi ini jaket Sehun?" gumamnya yang masih dapat didengar Sunny.

Sasuke's eyes flickered down to the ground between the legs of the men, and saw a flash of golden hair before the man's body replaced it. Sasuke moved so fast that there wasn't time to blink before he was right in front of the group, his eyes bleeding deep crimson with three lazily rotating commas. The men shivered, and Sasuke stared at each man individually, letting them know that he was watching them from now on, moving forward to get to the girl. They scampered out of his way, and in less than a second they were gone from the cafeteria. Sasuke knelt beside the bleary eyed girl, and examined her with his eyes, not wanting to touch her.

Driven back into the corner of the wall, Lucas managed to kick the table Bryce was standing on.  The blond guy had joined him there.  Both went down in a tangle of curses.  

under the open sky (the sun was still shining) and found themselves

"You, over there, at the very back!"