The Sweet Deal - Reviews

A story of how an underworld kingpin (after dying) transmigrates into a world closely resembling ancient China.The greatest problem with this story? Story development, and character design. This story is driven by the protagonist (every character other than the cliche kind old sister trope may as well not even exist). This means that the characterisation of the protagonist is immensely important.However...the protagonist's characterisation is all over the place. The protagonist during his past life was a cold, brutal, ruthless kingpin. After transmigrating, he meets his old sister...and in an instant his heart begins to soften. What kind of silliness is this? As the story goes on, the protagonist decides he must be a 'good guy' for the sake of the people who care for him (his mother, and older sister). This characterisation is so naive and silly that it left me absolutely flabbergasted.A story with good potential ruined by the hypocritical redemption of the protagonist.

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Haven't read this novel yet so I'll go for some neutral rating. The synopsis actually seems interesting enough, combined with its genre as a modern wuxia novel and the seemingly trouble-inducing type of main character, I'm willing to bet that this novel will be fun to read. I'll just vote this so that it might be published at a faster rate. Good job to the translator and thanks for the hard work! ?

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https://m.qidian.com/book/1025025602/617443502 this is a link where this can be read since this site doesn't want to post it ...............

This novel is really good, the story is captivating right from the start. the Main character has a good background and not your typical past that MC was abandoned by his parents or is an orphan because his parents died in a car accident, the writing quality has a few grammatical mistakes, but of course, considering the author is new it's no problem. the story binds you from the first chapter only. I am really excited about him getting strong and taking revenge on those mother fu**ers in the future .Am definitely waiting for more chapters.

Seriously the best detective online novel I’ve ever read.Don’t drop it and keep up the good work.

"Hey Shaheen. I'm really sorry for leaving you alone with Zain. But I really would love it if my most trusted and reliable friend were to marry my most darling sister which is why I want you two to get to know each other. Whenever our parents get marriage offers for you, I can't trust anyone because I don't know them as well as I know Zain. At least, with Zain, I can guarantee he will never hurt you and will never betray you, but I can't guarantee that for anyone else. If I ever hear that your future husband ever hurts you in any way, then I will probably kill him and take you back."

A minute passed in silence before the system replied once again. In this one minute of silence, Hobie died inside.

We just went walking and walking in this hot sunny desert. There are some crow flying around. Just then one of the crow bite me but thank goodness I was wearing sleeves. "It's dead" Claire said. I scared away the crow but all of them was now following us. "Run!!" Claire screamed. Many bullets had been wasted and now we're out. "Hey Birds" a woman said then the crows followed her. She has a fire gun or something I don't know what it is but it shoots fire. She opened it then set all the crows that goes after her. All the birds were cook all of them became roasted birds. "Thank you ma'am" I said "Thank you but who are you?" Claire asked "My name is Alice" that woman said "Thank you Alice" Claire tanked Alice "Your welcome" Alice said "What are you both doing out here in this hot desert and you are still a kid" then Claire grinned "Wait what was your names?" Alice asked. We entruduced ourselves to Alice. We then walked back to the hideout with Alice. We talked about what was happening but I knew it because my dad worked there. While we are talking In the way to the hideout. The crows are infesting it. Peoples were panicking. Many of them were lying in the ground, died.

She believes her ways is not whore-y though, maybe a little bit on a slutty side, that much she can admit.

Unperturbed as his father had raised him in the arts of politics where even the slightest sign of hesitation could cost one dearly, he smiled condescendingly. "But I know where they'll be."