The Supernatural Private Detective - Reviews

it would be a great story if the main character Amelia wasn't this stupid no back bone

I really like the story and I was excited about the main character actually telling someone the truth in the beginning but I can't read it anymore because of the non stop descriptions on everything. It's like you went and found every word you could to describe one single thing every paragraph. Sometimes it gets so bad you take up a whole chapter. If you could dial it down then I think you have something here.

Me esta gustando bastante, la combinacion de cultura china y japonesa es fastante interesante, y itachi es uno de mis personajes favoritos al igual que muchos otros

The story is good, however not everything is fleshed out. Also, that are more inconsistencies than the normal Chinese light novel. The translation is obviously Machine and not the best one. But if you are willing to not be too concerned over that then this is a fun read. An editor would make this a 4.5.

I used to like this series in the beginning but for me the MC lacks charisma and needed his "grandpa" So when the little martin left it didn't feel right and got boring or me

I expected a cliche mmorpg book when I clicked on the title but this book has really exceeded my expectations. It really has become my personal favourite and the concept of discovering your Qi through a game is seriously an unique thought. You are really amazing author.

As a writer you make me look dumb????but! Dude you're awesome! I read through 34 chapters in one sitting, drawn in and invested in every second! Forget being a great writer, this is a great story! Keep it up! Keeeeeeep it up! Wish I could make Aaron Wade as awesome as this???

The author is  giving their all in the world development of this tale of a forcefully retired pro gamer on his rise back to the top in a new, experimental VRMMORPG. Their extensive knowledge of video games is coupled with their love of mythos and lore. I wait with bated breath for every chapter.

The plot is interesting but very common, I trust you for making something very unique out of this, I also like the male lead, kinda reminds me of Cobra, so globally your plot is good but i suggest you to download Grammarly, it will help you to drastically improve your writing

trialread webnovel novels nowadays are of poor quality, it's either it's poorly translated or the plot is not consistent and is confusing, repeated chapters etc ????????u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️

Um dos melhores novel que já lê sinceramente recomendo muito espero que possa ter bastante capítulos seria ainda se aumentar a atualização de capítulos

Story started of great at first, aside from the fact that the mc is an absolute moron and one of the dumbest people I’ve read about.After his ability got upgraded to special grad the story got worse, his ability should upgrade every ability he absorbs to special grade at least, but he found multiple monsters with normal skills which he already has but since his ability should upgrade them to special which it doesn’t btw, makes it very dump for me. Also after the upgrade the normal monster seem to have the very same skills in a Rotation again and again there a very few to none at all new skills from normal monsters and it’s pretty unrealistic that mutants in the early level have so many different abilities but mutants at higher level have only a few and many have none at all.Also the dark continent ark (at least to chapter 234) is very boring for me.