The story needs an editor. I couldn't understand what the h*** was going on in the first chapter. Like when he woke up and touch something soft I thought he was gay cause he kept calling the girl a he.
It's a constant loss of brain cells reading this book, like holy ****. The story flow is choppy and unreadable, the constant missusage of he/she is a bother to read and the mc looks as brain dead as the story flow.
Good book but there are a few wrong pronouns and sometimes the names are messed up, but otherwise the story is nice and well paced and I enjoy it quite a bit
Loved it. Want more releases........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
I agree its a great story and not nearly as badly translated as most of babel novels stuff is which is where this story comes from but there are more then 500 chapters at novelhall.com while there arnt even 100 here
