Just like before, I'll be brief and to the point. (Curse 140 Word Count).To all those reading, will read, thinking of leaving a review, comment, power stone, or reply to my comments, I thank YOU for being apart of this! Let's move forward, strongly and with anticipation for the future.
Based on past books of author, there will no be any grammatical mistakes, plot loopholes..etc Beleive me the novel would be wonderful journey for our ever-growing addiction towards novels.
The novel started off with a great start but I personally find it getting boring as I read further. Maybe it's because Junho's improvement was a quite too fast and the time skips. I would want to see more scenes where Junho is working harder to achieve his dreams. In other words, I want him to suffer more to achieve his goal to be an idol. I think Junho will grow more because of this.Junho most likely didn't suffer much because of his high stats in luck, lol. Everything is going his way so far.I've only read up till chapter 8th and these are my opnions so far. It's still an good work, author ^^
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Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance ?. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha ? Gracias!
Writing Quality is great, there are little to no errors, smooth sentences.Stability of Updates is good, I guess. Since it currently only have 3 Chapters, I can't really say.Story Development is really unique, there are some words I couldn't recognize, and the pace is good. Character Design is also good, a bit unique. Their description is also good. World Background is great so no complaints there.
"Solider how dare you do such a thing! Explain yourself now if you don't want me to deny your right to be a soldier!" The man was dumbfounded when he heard Ryuu's honesty but he soon became furious that somebody would betray the king
