The Strangers - Across the Silent Heartbeat - Reviews

Translations kinda suck.                                                                                                                  

was well write and thought out for the most part. I just wish some parts had more detail. example the skip of five years. wish there was a little more there like did they every get married or when did they complete the mating.  also wish who was talking was put at the beginning of all chapter some didn't and I got confused

I read this story because someone said it's like Chrysalis. while the initial premise of this was true the more u read this story u realize that gem cant is compared to this coal. The initial plot was an interesting one but as it progressed, it became a brain drain. First, till about chapter 60 sum, Mc mentions his goal ....and my gosh it was sum bs. The system while helpful its like a cruth to the Mc while he somewhat figures stuff out. the system makes a lot of his growth irrelevant which to sum is nice but to me is boring. In Chrysalis most of his stuff was learned everything he knows or did was trial and error or he had to earn it. Simple communication with his own family was something he had to earn. but here mc is given that skill. there is no trial and error with him. it is just growth with the guidance of the system(boring after a while). His intelligence is quite questionable not totally dumb but not the brights bulb in the barn. This story is quite nice if u turn your brain off. Come here expecting anything more and you are in for a disappointment. All in it was just ok for me.

The story is super interesting, but I lost interest when the MC who didn't show any sympathy for other people's problems *suddenly* sympathized with another foreigner...

The plot sounds like Trafford Trading Club novel. I mean both the mcs in each novel can make someone`s wish come true with something valuable like lifespan

"You know what we are?" The leader of the group, a shorter bird whose head seemed flat. "Oh, yeah! I heard the Emperor met his Genin team. Nice!"

she had guessed that the person possessed power lower than Shīzi, so in order to take both him down and not alert him he used Yu Yan which Shīzi trusted to carry out the deed.

Once reaching the cafeteria, I was led by the crowd to a long lunch line. Looking at the menu I was stunned to see the various options of delicious food available. All of them look so good, I haven't seen this much food, since, uh, well ever. But my excitement was quickly put down after seeing the prices in a tiny corner in the menu. Honestly.

"Jiyan..." Riva grabbed Jiyan's arm, pleading piteously.

Krypto Currency: 1,250

' I really need to calm down now, think of solutions....hmm what do people like.. dogs, dogs are ...cute right. That's exactly what I need - cuteness, overwhelming cuteness, oh and smarts.. although not sure how that will work out'

"HAHA"