The Stories of Mine in the Ming Dynasty of China in 1368 - Reviews

novel is too generic, predictable, cringe. the writing quality is bad. yikes

It’s most likely the trashiest Chinese ”overpowered MC” trash novel that I have ever read in my life. Not worth it even as a time-killing exercise.

overall decent quality translation. and even the machine translations found elsewhere do not show a significant drop in quality vs what is given here with proper nouns left in chinese but everything else is translated properly. also there is a French translation online too. both the French and mtl go up a few hundred chapters.

I've read until the 50+ chapters and it keep me on the beat, after the explaining phase on early chapters the rest run smoothly, making more each chapters interesting and exciting ?This is what I felt after reading until Chapter 56:✍Writing quality: The writing quality is good. No glaring grammatical errors or typos. Its too few if it does have any mistakes.⏰Updating stability: the author updates one chapter daily ❤?Story development: the story is optimally paced. The two MCs are still kids but very OP.the story revolves around their brotherhood.... which I really like. I like it when stories don't include romance or anything alike. Action and adventure are great here.?World Background: At first i thought that the world herewould be simple and straight but its not. There's vast number of powers and races involved in this story but it won't give you confusion or information overload. d author explains well the complexity of its world.?u200d♀️Character Design: I love the way author created the averaging 14 years old kids here. i love their mischievousness and sudden coldness when in times of battle and they are too adorable in happy times. ?in short, this work is a  gem! ? ? ?

Too much tragedy. The story is starting after the death of his brothers and family. Then he finds his twin sisters are not dead. But while going to find them they will be killed before he reached there. Too much tragedy I can't take it. And then there is one all-knowing system and that will not give him any good answers, just being mysterious. Yet he found his sisters dead.

Tl:dr hidden gem, solid A- story well worth a readThe writing contains western slang and internet meme references throughout, which for myself is a major plus and quite humorous, but can be offputting to some. The narrative moves forward at a slow trot, and does justice to the whole "reincarnated as a monster" genre. This is no "re:monster

People stared the two Shrouds nervously, Shrouds were mysterious people around the Kingdom, they were people not to agitate, and their uncanny way of disappearing was enough to bring chills up your spine.

[ABILITIES] (passive) (+)

Daniel Swift; code name- "Ghost agent 2": A cute chocolate boy, who was also great at studies. His brain was faster than the computer. He was the best hacker one could desire of. His mother and father had a divorce and got married to different people when he was 13 and then was thrown in an orphanage "bourbon nurturing orphanage".

/( sorry for all the p.o.v. switches )/

"Hello?"

I snicker.