The Soul of Mercury - Reviews

It was good in earlier chapters but in latter chapters it keeps getting worse and worse . bringing out logic from god knows which stupid mind. I really liked the concept but the way the story development and the MC's mind work is in latter chapters is as bad and worse as it gets.. I really want to know if the author IQ is really in the negative side.

Bruh how the heck did this not even get picked at all!?Like it’s literally the best of the batch and it’s like only minimal nationalism stuff.

Hello, Eshwar here. Due to something happening I kinds stressed out about it and the story had started to awry (not exactly sure how you feel, but I just feel like I added few fillers here and there), so from the next chapter I'll be back at my own pace, their won't be any noticeable changes though. Anyway, just wanted to let this be known, thank you for reading and. [Peace]ahem, I have posted this in the recent chapter (Ch: Changes) it is just a copy and paste with few new words, anyway, hope you enjoy the story.thank you for reading.[Peace]

It is a well balanced story with a good setting and reasonable developments. The abilities available and character backgrounds are also satisfying. I wish this gets selected. What are the editors doing.

I nodded at him before adding, " After finding some water".

"Decimate!" (Stephen)

    "What a weird dream..." He thought to himself turning to the left to face his disciple only to be met by the back of the other's head.

"Jalanin mobilnya kak,aku benci liat play boy gk tau diri kaya merza"

"Poor mouse, must've moved on." Toriel had commented as she continued on her way through the various puzzles which for some reason found themselves already to have been solved which she was a bit confused about. Though she paid it not much mind as she continued on her daily walk through the ruins. Then she paused, a feeling in her stomach that she had done this once before. Strange feeling of Deja vu. Shrugging a bit, she laughed it off and picked up her pass, quick walking along the stone paths of the ruins.

Great story, good word choice and great envisions. You can imagine what the story and characters look like and it updates every day. Great author and good story