The Shattered Firmament - Reviews

Such an interesting story! Keep it up

Reading a couple of chapters, The story itself is fine, the frequent update is great, and the characters themselves are decent only major concerns about this book is the grammar and spelling errors as long as you fix them it’s fine.

The story is interesting.It has a decent storytelling and worldbuilding, recommended for those who like something like dungeon story.However, the reaction of the MC is a bit dull. Maybe the author is not experienced yet, but it become better in the later chapter.Overall, recommended!

I don't know much about the story yet, but I can see a potential in the plot. Some punctuation errors around the dialogues can be improved with a little editing. Keep writing :)

I don't know who copied who or if it is the same author with a different pseudonym, but this novel is 95% similar to Animal assassin group. It doesn't even try to be anything worth while.Please webnovel, add quality control.

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The plot very interesting but the translate is suck aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

why is no one commenting about how good this book is ....

"Monsters raiding our base" The guy on the door said.

Seeing you everyday will only remind and torment me of what had happen and because I can't tell anymore if were enemies or lovers now.

Let those who worship evil's might

"Headmaster, you wished to see me?" Harry asked with a puzzled smile, entering the Headmaster's office.