It is a pretty well written story. Thought out and planned well. The spelling and sentences are improving as chapters go on. Currently on chapter 56 so got a while to give my full thoughts yet only getting a few passes a day.
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First of all, I have to say that the author's writing experience is oozing out of the chapters that I read. It overshadows a lot of the amateur works on this platform. It is creative and has perfect wordplay and brilliant scenes. The characters don't feel bland and one-dimensional like many others but they have a realistic touch.Overall, this book is a must-read.
"Young Master, your face looks slightly red. Are you alright?" Nian Xiaomu moved forward when she heard what he said and pointed at his handsome face with her fair, slender fingers.
"Iya, jangan berhubungan lagi sama dia! Dia itu bukan cowok baik - baik! Dia selalu terobsesi sama cewek dan Aisyah adalah korbannya. Kamu tau nggak? Dia ke sini itu mau nyusul Aisyah. Serem 'kan?" oceh Fathan tanpa jeda.
