The Shadows of Fate - Reviews

Louis just gave up because Pamela had a relationship with other man but isn't he the same if he wants Pamela to accept him why can't he himself accept her

Es muy mala... Durante la lectura me tuve que tomar pausas en cada capítulo para reflexionar si debería continuar leyendo, el cap 7 fue mí límite. La novela es muy forzada al máximo lo cual se deja claro con las barras de metal (quién se perfora el cuerpo con barras de metal, solo para verse mejor?) Es un Don el cual se puede desarrollar como un músculo no es totalmente necesario el uso de las barras, o como mínimo no de las grandes.

Story started really nice.MC was a legendary player in the game before... Now he is in the game, but not legendary any moreThis not legendary any more gets mentioned quite often. But EVERYTHING he does is only possible because he is legendary...His silver strength is meaningless, because he can slay groups of silver fighter easily (without weapons or armor, btw). The gap between silver and gold strength is enormous. Tomorrow a gold strength enemy will arrive... no problem, as I can easily defeat him, because I was once a legendary player (honestly?)I stopped reading, as the 'I am not legendary, I just can do legendary stuff' was just too much for me...

Just continue this is reallu go goddddddddddffffffffffffffffffff reallyyyyyyyyyyyy gooood yaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy use please dont stop at midway like ither novels i meatb thar really suck i think you cant understand that fucking pain, right?

Keep up the good work, don't change your style of writing!But if possible try to slow down the s scene since there are some children on webnovel who might wish to read it as well. My brother likes it too, keep it up!  #Vampires ❤

I hope Martin doesn't get married or end up with elena alone, hope he keeps all the actress his girlfriend and be in relationship with them till he dies.

"I never said curses or blessing can change laws of nature unless you are as powerful as nature itself. A curse or a blessing is just a small law created by the power of a soul and it only works temporarily within the universe." Veer explained.

THIS NOVEL IS DROPPED

        "WHAT?!" Brock and I said in almost complete unison.

"Never, ever  judge a book by it's cover Light," Ana said with a lazy smirk on her face and a gleam in her eyes. As he looked at her with soft eyes, he said.

"You don't have to worry about it; I make a lot of people uncomfortable, what with all the talking to myself and stuff."

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