It will take you on a great journey along the way to an adventurous path with Alan, an extraordinary prince. Just go for it.????????????????????????????
This is good stuff. It's kinda a slow build up type of novel(also short chapters cmon bruh) but it's all good. world back ground hasn't made much actual progress(we see how the people view things and all but that's nothing but a brick in its foundation). character is good and quite consistent from what I read (1-20 chapter). Stability of Updates? c'mon webnovel can't you not suck any further? I'm genuinely woried about the path y'all decided to take.
started decent but multiple things ruin it1 inconsistencies - MC refering to female characters as he etc annoying 2 the reason for the dungeons to appear just stupid - god lost interest, by putting in the god to your novel it removes any form of progression that MC could achieve through effort for example if you wrote a novel where you train day in day out to develop great power and strength then superman with 0 weaknesses and immortal turns up all efforts seems pointless 3 the reasons for demons desire to conquer utterly ridiculous - they know their greatest enemy could wipe them out with a thought yet still think they are high level beings
Sucker for these stories! It was quite a nice and enjoyable read. Hmm. How can I help? I humbly suggest that the author use Grammarly app to further improve tiny grammar and capitalization missed. Please keep it up May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, learn more, and maybe earn more soon!
Honestly, I’m only a few chapters in, but I can say that I’ve really been enjoying the read. As long as you overlook a few minor spelling mistakes, everything about plot, characters, etc. is great. It often seems random, but in a good, natural way.
"Relax, Kima. I'm sure she knows that—just go talk to her after class," Eliza assured me that Ms. Kyoko would handle this. Eliza then said, "I'll be waiting outside of the classroom when you're done."
"Oh. So this should be the rumored young mistress Li Qin. Hey your birthday is already two months away that means that the day you wed is also approaching." The lady recognized Li Qin by name and reminded Xiao Feng that his fifteenth birthday is coming.
Ai trembled, his body growing hotter as it was teased by Wang. The deep kiss moved to his neck, making him moan out and tremble while he felt the heat rushing to his lower area.
