The Senior Year Shift - Reviews

enjoyable atleast..............................................................................................................................................

Its one of the better novels, Ive been reading.

Ahhhhh, where do I even begin with this one? This story’s got potential—a real banger, easily top 50 on WebNovel. Grammar’s a bit shaky, but hey, it’s good enough that you don’t mind too much. But then… the author starts hittin’ you with clichés, and the MC? Man, he was this close to turnin’ into a full-on wimp. Glad he finally grew a pair and took out those bastards after they killed the servant woman, but that scene? Just one giant, nasty cliché. It’s no wonder the comments went radio silent after that chapter.This coulda been one of the greatest stories on here, but I think the author’s got it twisted. Just ‘cause the MC starts out as a servant doesn’t mean he needs some grand tragedy to justify becoming a villain. Hate to break it to ya, but this guy? He’s no villain. Not even an anti-hero. Dude watches the woman who raised him get forced to stab herself just ‘cause someone ordered it, and what’s he do? Flashes some “killing intent” and just stands there. Like, buddy, you just got her killed. Could’ve seen it coming a mile away—these people tried to pull something shady just a day before, and he’s still clueless. And then he goes on to snag the top spot in the academy did he think they were gonna congratulate him? Makes no sense.I’ll say it again: even the lowliest servants back in the day knew when to break a rule, throw a punch, stand up for somethin’. Sure, some got killed for it, but at least they went out with their heads held high. They didn’t just stand around lookin’ dumb while people they cared about got hurt. It’s time the author dials down on the “tragic backstory” nonsense and gives us an MC who’s got a bit more grit, ‘cause right now, he’s fallin’ flat. If the Mc story is rewritten, take out a the one big cliche, and think of a creative way for him to gain enemies or become the villain you desire, story is easily up there for one of the top reads….good luck to the author

the story has potential. the characters are ok. but the writing quality is shit. characters talks about themselves in third person. no corrections and poor English.

The lights inside the ship turned on and gave a cozy feeling to the passengers. Elizabeth has been granted permission by Lemuel to enter the coordinates, as she did.

"If it's for you, I'll even kill those two ugly old men, tee-hee" said Su Hui Qing with a seductive smile.

First :v...

I could use a little fuel myself

I was me! This body, this mind, it was all mine, no one can take it from me.

Hello! I am Tigr4!This is my first original story and the second one I've posted, with the first being a fanfiction.I won’t talk about my first work posted because it was quite disappointing, and I made a lot of mistakes with it.But this one is different… I think.Here are some things you can expect from this story:First: A reasonably decent romance, I believe, and fun to read.Second: A character with a mindset very different from typical Xianxia protagonists. He’s not obsessed with perfection at every step, and as strange as it sounds, it actually makes sense.Every Xianxia protagonist seems obsessed with achieving perfection, often making their journey much harder than if they were simply "normal."Why face 500 million celestial tribulation lightning bolts when the usual is just 9? All for a power that supposedly allows fighting between realms, yet in the final stages of cultivation, perfection often doesn't make much of a difference, and, most of the time, they can barely defeat someone just a few levels above them within the same realm.The fact is, as surprising as it may seem, they pursue this perfection and nearly die countless times for it. And what’s the ultimate goal? Immortality! They almost kill themselves repeatedly, relying on "plot armor" just to survive the disasters they themselves cause in the pursuit of immortality.Typical features of perfection in Xianxia stories: fighting between realms, and a slow, problematic level-up progression compared to what the MCs should reach.My MC will only pursue "near-perfection," fight between realms, and have a much faster level-up progression.Third: What kind of second was that? Is this crazy author insane?!Fourth: In the first 5 chapters, I messed up the word count, and they ended up being short. I made the following chapters much longer, and by chapter 12, they already exceeded 15,000 words. The average now is 1,500 words or more, excluding the first few chapters.Fifth: There is no fifth point.Sixth: Leave some Power Stones and happy comments, don’t disrespect me, or I’ll cry!Seventh: In the first 13 chapters, the MC is quite lonely. Personally, I like the story more from chapter 14 onwards.Eighth: Eighth.Ninth: Oh, I just remembered now that this is a list of what to expect...