1. i read the first chapter..its not that the translation is bad, the translation good the grammar is good too, but with the too detail explanations -which i think is not necessary-, it makes this novel too boring too read.. i cant say the story is bad because with just the way novel written, it makes me hasitate to read more... mmm or should i say it really bores me -no offense here- just my opinion though... 2. the way the character introduced in the novel is way too unique, some people maybe found it not uncomfortable... though i read the first chapter but i cant understand anything, i understand the words, its just i cant understand what the author want to tell 3. will have to reread the chapters, this is for now, maybe will change my opinion after i read further.. 4. good luck translators... and editors