It's good
But I had to run to the dictionary a couple of times to check out some words like fervour
Maybe use everyday words
But good plot good story you rock
I love the plot of the story as well as the characters, it's a good read
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Wow, this is one of the best fantasy Novel I have read so far.
I love the imagery! The the questions of mystery of world.
The introduction is just so captivating.
I would love to read more and more of this actually
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