The second son of the Kluoren family. - Reviews

Clara and Sandy.. but I love the storyline. I hope to see Clara and Alex together soon.

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This is becoming hot garbage fast. The beginning was interesting, with a little bit of world building before going into the action. Then came the last 5 chapters, which were just the same chapters as those before but told from a different POV. The EXACT SAME. No new element unexpected.And I feel like this won't be the last time, so if you want to read, be prepared to skip a lot of chapters.Otherwise the TL quality is okay, some weird synthax but understandable.

The book is pretty good, it's a combination of several books I loved but the author confuses me a lot. He changes description a lot, he also tries too much to be funny.

This novel startet Awesome but then it whent to ****.but still you can read it till chap 159 then drop it, because then the Mc gets the fucking great Idea to turn all his gilrs in Futas.I mean were the MC himself one (Futa) then it where a diferent Story but the Mc here is male so FUCKING IN HELL NO JUST NO!!!!!

So, here is my review after going through the latest chapters, which is ten I guess.This review won't spoil you, as I am not here to fix the mistakes, but just let you know what it hasThe story is not the best I have ever seen, but with enough focus, you can understand what's going on.The writting quality is again not perfect, but far better than the average, but author tends to use some uncommon words, which with enough banging will be clear.Character are good, and have some depth which is good as far as what I aim for.Update stability is the worst feature of WN, and I never understood the point of the feature. Since the book is on a contest, author would pump out chapters daily, and may get stressed, so Author can take a rest if the quality is good. Not everyone runs after quantity. In the long run, the later winns I guess.World Background was the one of the fee things I am very strict nwith, and thus book, not till the chapter satisfied my desire for world building.Ah... Here I go, fixing errors, wasting both my and my brain cells, but if it did help, then it's good for me

Another imprint… she thought that at the end of her journey, she might be filled with imprints. Should she just open up a business of Tattoos?

The receptionist rose in panic, "Jackson, welcome back! How was your ride." she quickly fixed her hair and put a warm smile on her face.

As we left the school I linked my arm with Jake's. He gave me a look but didn't say anything. I was really excited. I googled go carts during my last class. I was afraid we were going to be playing with shopping carts. I still would of played with shopping carts but this sounds way more fun.

"Summer kami. Ako, si Walts at si Lucas." Boom! Para namang isang bomba ang sinabi n'ya.

"So, my daughter, you wanna hear my story."

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