The Second Dawn - Reviews

in all honesty I'm enjoying it kind of, but there is so many issues on the translation it makes it almost impossible to follow correctly. names constantly changing, consistency rubbish and it like the characters have no idea what they are even thinking let alone saying

This book is really well written and the story is awesome! Love the characters! Overall would recommend to anyone. Only problem is the author has seemed to stop updating all together not sure when the author will be back it’s a bummer.

Ano ano ba ipapaprint saanunsyo ilan ba yung teacher and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there

Author, don't put a few exclamation marks. (Yes!! Yeah!! Oh okay!!) It's just stupid. And I don't understand why you added punishments to the system, they don't even motivate, the main character already has enough motivation. The main character can't even refuse... He is, in fact, just a weak-willed slave of the system.

The story is not bad and if you love realistic stories you might love this. but im going to be honest i dislike this story a lot, i would never consider it as a romance story, more of drama, realism, sports but besides that if your a romantic guy like me you will hate this, especially the ntr made me feel uncomfortable i already has a bad opinon and pessimism towards real life but now i also has to have a pessmism outlook in fiction. It's not bad author don't get me wrong, but it's not for everyone especially for me who has a sensitive heart when it comes to romance.

currently my favorite novel even with how with how little chapters there are I hope you continue with this novel because it looks promising

"Believe?" Zi Wu's one laugh brought along a round of coughing fit, the surrounding people busying to feed him water, after a very long time, does he finally settle down, looking out the windows, saying, "It is but a ray of obsession that cannot be put down. Always fearing when it's time I go down, she has not waited for me. Always wanting to get a little look of her now, only then would my heart be at ease."

? Good book , I have read up to the newest chapter which was chapter 60 at the time of me posting this review . I have been left satisfied by the ending of volume 1 and still eager for volume 2 , It has been a good experience reading this book so that’s about it for my review .

"Okay then, I'll be on my way."

"This bead came with Daniel when he came to us. It's the only thing we have of Daniel's past".

"The surgery was a success." The doctor beamed. Hope unclenched her jaw. Her grim expression relaxed but came back with renewed vigor. Her mind was flooded with unanswered questions. Who did this? And why?

I enjoy this story,I really am,but at this point,it looks like author just dragging the story.I mean some chapter which could be conclude in 2 or 3 chapter have been dragged into 10+,because sometimes a whole chap just fill with one character though and author like to explain something too detail that sometimes it's not necessary at all.Until now,I can't see where exactly where this story is really going,it has been 100++ and the mc is still 5 years old.This all is just my opinion and thoughts as a reader and overall author has done a good work??