The Scent of Revenge - Reviews

This novel is acceptable till 100 chapters. After that the charecters become more dumb, foolish and brainless. They cant even see the very obvious things. Those are just one dimensional charects created to cover up the fact that the story is very lacking in the aspects of creativity and good plot. The MC becomes a very lazy idiot - here this author tried to imitate the "monster pet evolution" book but  ended up creating a useless low IQ trash MC. If you want to read it because you like the first 80-90 chapter, i suggest you dont but You will be very dissapointed if you keep reading. I am saying it out of personal experience (i read the remaining chapters in raw)

Awesome story... I love everything about it...Well written, the background is amazing and can be understood even if you're not Chinese. Of course, the profound stuff will just sound like nonsense to us, Americans, but it's bearable nonetheless. The only two faults with this novel are the fact that it has too many Chinese references that non-Chinese people will never understand. For lack of a better way of describing it, this is the type of novel where a river is never just a river, it is a dragon circling the heavens in a ying-yang sign of blah blah blah... Doesn't make sense to me... The next issue is the fact that 50 chapters in and only about four days have passed throughout the story... the story is so slow... and when I mean slow, I don't mean slow in progress... I mean slow because the author spends half the chapter talking about all this Chinese stuff that we will never understand anyway. This novel is amazing, there is no doubt about that, but this isn't written for everyone... just a very targeted audience of Chinese readers in my opinion.

Good Stuff MATTTEEEEEEEE! Writing quality; could have some improvements but my English ain't all that good anyway. Stability of updates; I don't really care, as long as chapters are released frequently. Obviously, real life isn't that simple in which someone can easily release chapters daily. Story development; I like. Character design; I like a lot. Muscle Men and Bald Bros for life. World background; pretty good, it's basically modern with just slightly more advanced technology.

Mass release or bonus chapters?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

[You should know that Master has a grasp on everything that happens in the world. A bet where you are the winner is simply impossible.]

kurono opened his eyes looking at the alien's ugly face, turning his head he noticed louis a look of fear on his face and the unconscious Jessica leaning on them, he tried to move but found it hard with the great pressure been exerted on them while they were slowly approaching its mouth.

Dibeberapa titik jalan terjadi kemacetan.

A/n: This is in no way promoting suicide. If you are suicidal, please seek help. I know exactly what it's like, and am currently going through it. If you need someone, I'm here for you

But I see her open her crimson lips, softly kisses the tip only to softly slurp the tip inside of her mouth as it's so warm and hot as I remember ravaging, plus her slight tears eyes are also a massive turn on as I see her taking inch-by-inch of my cock down her mouth as she's taken at least 4 inches inside of her

When I got to the house I took a sip of my water while checking the time on my phone, I saw it was 6:43am  so I still had time to burn until everyone is up. I went upstairs to go have a shower, after five minutes in the shower I got dressed and I went down stairs to make a cup of green tea, while the kettle was boiling I went to the book shelf and took  a random book and started to read, I was one chapter in to the book when the kettle started whistling. I took the kettle off the stove and pour it into my mug and settle down on to the coach and went back to reading my book in my left hand while drinking my cup of tea in the other hand while counting down the minutes until my dysfunctional family wakes up.

Kriiiiiiinggggggg !!

"No!""No!"