The scarlet heir - Reviews

The story is good and interesting i would have continue to read if not of the quality of the writing, which obviously just translated straight from a translator with no editing done to it, which is not really a smart move.I’m giving you a 2 star for now, if there is any improvement i will personally remove this review with a new one to review the improved one.Good luck

What a surprise, another pet novel is picked instead of other good novels. Sick and tired of this genre at this point. Hope that this repetitiveness is fixed and that other good novels are given a chance instead.

Improved and less racist version of im really a super star featuring more understandable comedy and entertainment. A worthy spiritual succesor that seem to do everything right

The story is good, although there may be some grammar mistakes, the story progression is good and the story is thrilling. Overall a good book.

Please do continue with writing out your stories, You are very good at writing out a very interesting beginning. I wish you were some sort of superhuman to write out tons of updates everyday~4.2/5 solid spelling and punctuation, Lack of chapters gives me conniptions. The amount of details is great.

The author is quite had a good grasp on the story. Nice description of what is currently happening and I enjoyed reading! Best of luck author for the success of your novel! Have a good day!

perfect story with perfect character development

Several minutes driving along the ragged downward road, they've arrived at their first rendezvous point.

The field was packed with ninjas of different villages cramping up every nook and corner of the field. There were some from Konoha, Kiri, Kumo, Iwa and the most eye grabbing Suna.

  She was surprising to see that cute girl was lying in front of her. "Eh!" Mei stood up then moves backward while the girl was getting up and stood up looking at Mei with a very sharp eye.

"Fuck if I ever get back to Titania I'm gonna strangle Baron and have his friends and family killed for giving me this piece of crap!"

"okay lee take me where she is we are going home".