Hello! I only read up to chapter 5, but I can see the author's hard work.The first chapter is so detailed describing the characters and the situation, but it's a bit of info dump in it. I think some information could be told in the next chapters gradually to give it a more surprising element.The author beautifully described the events in the story. It's so majestic that I really enjoy every description.The dialogues went smoothly. It's not awkward and stiff. That's really good.Each chapter is quite long, but it's not boring. It's interesting and makes me want to read more.The pace is just right. There's a 'seven months later' jumping in the fifth chapter, but it doesn't feel rush. I can still enjoy the development.Overall, this book has a lot of potentials. I hope this book will shine in the future ?
