The Ruthless Billionaire, Australian Bachelors - Reviews

Giving 5 stars just cuz of the villain tag and hopefully Mc is actually evil and not some trash antihero. I've stopped after a few chapters cuz I hate waiting for updates will continue after more chapters are out

Well it's kinda interesting.. nice job!I'll wait for more chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MoremoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMore

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Cringe.The author genuinely thinks making fun of readers and breaking fourth walls is funny, but he handles it in a way its cringey and unimmersive. There is no coherent flow, its just scenes stamped against one after another, its kinda like watching a tv cartoons where next episode are not related to the next.Or its like watching Gintama but unlike Gintama this aint funny at all. One of the cringy comedy I could not forget are done this way.Reader: Wait a minute this seems odd.Mc: **breaks the fourth wall and proceeds to say: Hey if you the reader think that way you are wrong cuz [insert reason here]I have short term memory, adding to the fact they are forgettable I wanted to bring something up. I remember some scenes that i wanted to point out but oh well.

I love the story thus far, I wanteded to know the background of the main character, why he was abandoned and a consistent in flow of chapters! The story is captivating keep it up! Who is the My lady and what does she wany

It needs work but I can tell the author is passionate and likes to write. I can appreciate the effort and am willing to respect the dedication to writing something of this length. There’s a lot of room for change and improvement.

Infront of them were standing Twenty Cultivators and in front of them was a man in his thirties, who was sitting on a rock. He was watching at the Hall made in the Middle of the Mountain.

Title's: Trash, pulchritudinous, cripple, numb skull, and retardo

"But, before you can go..."

Kahime lagi-lagi terkekeh, tapi kali ini dia terkekeh bahagia dan senyuman sinisnya semakin lebar. "Ternyata aku udah bikin kamu penasaran. Aku bertahan demi orang-orang yang kusayangi, karena merekalah yang bisa membuatku bertahan sampai sekarang. Aku semakin kuat demi melindungi mereka yang lemah, walaupun aku sudah membunuh dan menindas para gangster yang lemah. Dan sekarang adalah waktunya membalas kalian." jawabnya enteng.

"Well, its not so much that he done it before, but more like he's ordered to do it," King said, stabbing his knife into the wooden ground of the room. "Let me explain what I mean." He then launched into a full explanation of not only Gladisor but a bit about the city as well.

-Vitality: 4