The road trip family - Reviews

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This novel is amazing. It should definitely be picked. I have read a lot of novels throughout the years and I can say this with complete assurance it is one of the few masterpieces. it is filled with action and comedy, adventure and great world building, everything seems to real and fantastic at the same time...I would strongly recommend this novel to both a new reader and a veteran!!!!

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Another unoriginal story based on the World of Warcraft game aka WoW.When this site turns to pay per view it will die as we (westerners) dont expect to pay for poor quality stories.

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This is more like an 'inspired' novel from⁷ "Birth Of the Demonic Sword" from the dragon fight to the guards teaching him, all of it. Being inspired by a novel and making your own base on that is completely fine, but getting completely influenced is also bad. Your novel just feels like another iteration of "BoDS" it's insane how similar it is. Just from reading this i already know you're a big fan of "BoDS" This is more like a fanfic than anything. Sorry but except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability, I'll give the others a one star. I hope you can carve your own mold someday.

I have read up to chapter 560 and I can say the following:1) Don't start if you don't like blood and gore.2) The author works really hard to write the book, have you ever seen a writer studying biology for scenes of blood and gore?3) The character is intelligent and capable, just a bit stupid in discovering the system's capabilities.4) The only thing missing is little or no side character descriptions.Note: Sometimes we forget what the characters look like, so sometimes they could be reminded in the form of little reminders or a special section explaining character appearances could be published.5) In short, it is a book that has been given a good effort, you will not regret reading it.

With a hug we finally separated into different directions after running for a few minutes, looked around to see if there was nobody nearby and used shumpo to appear on a house which was not damaged or burned,

"Interesting, what advantages could it give?"Daniel asked curiously

A second later when I regained my sense I was falling from the sky and could see the ground quickly coming up below me. I shielded my face and cried out while hoping that it wouldn't hurt too much.

"You seem pretty relaxed about getting 6th on the slate leaderboard," she commented.  "You won even more points than I did in my bet."

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