The Rise of Theodosius: The Roman Emperor of the New World. - Reviews

Evaluation: Below AverageWQ: Several gramm errors which doesn't greatly affect the story itself. Several repeated dialogue & redundant thought process. 3/5SD: With a slow to average pace development which greatly affects the story & MC progression that resulted in several plot holes. 3/5CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are severely lacking. His powers are OP (High regen/intelect & technopathy) but was nerfed as per your portrayal which is contradictory. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for marvel-verse. 2/5US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed & tons of redundancy. 3/5WB: it's already at Chapter39 however it is still in it's beginning phase & it lacks exploration which is a let down as marvel-verse is very broad. 3/5Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

Oh man... I waited so long for a novel like this, it took a while, but I finally found it, Please continue with the excellent work..........

Many typos/incomplete sentences (some words just missing, leaving empty spaces).Starting from chap 200++, the text getting smaller and smaller in each chapter, ****** it unreadable.

For me, this is one of the best entertainment novels out there. The writing quality is honestly top-notch every time I read a chapter. And doesn't have any generic tags like 'harem' in it, which is personally not my cup of tea.  

This is the first YA romance I've met where the obvious high intelligence of the main characters is a major factor. They're not nerdy so much as they're dedicated. Their emotional involvement and development has stuttered at times, but they're turning out beautifully. They've managed to impress professors at college even before they've been admitted. They're concerned with family and doing the right things by them. They're just so stinkin' admirable, and I love it.

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This story is one that i would like more if. I really hope it continues to progress.  Author keep up the great work.  I need more story.  The only draw back is that we do not see enough of the merging of two lives.  How is it going to work?  I need to know more please

They talked for some time and they were going back to their rooms when Eva saw that familiar back that she saw at the airport again in their hotel's lobby but it was just a glimpse before he turned around the corner. Before Eva could follow him, Kristie had begun to lead her towards her room saying that she was tired. She unwillingly followed her. After lying down on her bed, Eva continuously thought about that person trying to recognise who he was but she wasn't able to. She soon dozed off.

"Herbivore." The little girl side-eyed him judgementally. "It means to fight," She continued slowly as if speaking to a child. "if you don't know what spar means.Fightme."

Causing him to suddenly stop

Icelyn is the top students in the school. She being love by the school principal, Miss Taylor. Miss Taylor love Icelyn because she is clever. Icelyn always at the top during exam. She also beautiful. A lot of people like her because she is clever, pretty and friendly. But deep in her heart, she hate  Est because Est's family is more rich than her family. Est's family is the most rich and powerful people in the world. Est has everything in her hand except for good grades. Icelyn really want to beat Est in the exam. She want to shows that even she is not as rich as Est, she can make the whole people in the school recognized and love her. Icelyn's family is the third rich family in the world.

"I just don't feel comfortable standing here while you two talk and I can't hear a thing. But don't worry because I will make it so we can choose who we can speak to. We could use it to talk to each other over long distances or even to distract someone." I said to justify my point.