The Return of Lilietta - Reviews

The Return of Lilietta
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This made me feel like I'm on a high school campus in Japan. The story is good, but now for the flaws...You missed a lot of places where you should put punctuation.I advise you to show not tell. Information dumps are dreaded by readers! Try not to tell your readers too much while showing them a whole lot.
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A wonderful tale of a bastard in charge of a guild of cut throat mercenaries, any one of which in polite society would be strung up and beaten with a stick. From comical misha** of a cowardly warrior forcefully conscripted to a plushie loving one eyed berserker woman, from a towering crude titanblood to a happy go lucky eldritch horror associating warlock, from a wonderfully lewd demonic woman to a horse wanted for murder. There's no end to original characters who are funnier, crazier and down right entertaining from their first introductions to their exits stage right.Read this book if you want anti heroes, scheming bastards, an MC who is a male medusa and an author who brings all these inglorious bastards to life with seeming ease and no end of flare!
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5 star goes without a doubt!!!!!!!!!Reasons- First the author name was enough. heheh???????second- the synopsis???????and the third- is the book! still a start, but I'll wait patiently for chps.
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Hey there!Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Walking through the domain of beasts and monsters Draig kept patting his new Pack, it would allow him to carry far more than what he used to. However this was also a necessity as with the knowledge of magic he was now aware of how to use monster parts to make weapons to boost the effects of his enchantments.
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-Chris David, (Another character I haven't shown much) has the power to control gravity, he can fly, levitate objects, lower gravity for a certain while. And more.
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I heard a sound come from Solange-san's throat, so I knew she drank the water correctly.
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Following this, all the students that had killed Class 1 Magical Beasts, including Sasuke and Tieta, all walked up to the platform. There stood a teacher specifically assigned to count and record the number of monster cores that the students had earned.
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Affinity: Fire, Water
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~ Today is the last day of PSR exam. If I fail or didn't attend for today, all will be lost. I grew scared. Thunderstorms continue non stop. Frogs keep on croaking. The last bus just left. I feel something not right. ~
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❝It's all right, sweetie. We will listen.❞ She turned to their servant, Margaret, who was just standing on the other side of the room. ❝Please get a glass of water for Daphne.❞ The servant nodded and hastily exited the room.

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