Writing Quality is a 4-star because although there's a wide use of jargons and gaming slang terms, there are a few typos here and there, and the sentence flow sometimes felt a bit awkward; I tend to drown during writing so I sometimes missed those silly mistakes. Even for Chapter 1 I spent 1 whole day trying to proofread it myself, which took a lot of time from me writing.Stability of Updates is a 3-star because so far, I only have two major story arcs planned which would amount to 50+ chapters. I'll however, am confident to deliver at least 1 chapter a week, as there's another title I'm working on as well.Story Development is a 5-star because so far, there is a logical sequence of events take happened one after another, and I try to reduce using plot armor as much as I could consciously, and even if there is a plot armor, I try to make it not OP and can be countered.Character Design is a 4-star, I based the MC of a 30-years old man with no career IRL. Thus, he had a very .old-man vibes to him, but his personality was very immature because he spent his leisure time playing video games with people 5-10 years younger than him - a typical man-child. I am already planning to introduce another key character in the coming chapters.World Background is a 5-star because I actually based the story setting from a recurrent nightmare I had when I was a child. It was so traumatic that I remember vividly the details of that world. I really want to describe the world that I saw in my dream.P.S. I am the author of Cal.Prognos and I personally have a few opinions on this work of mine.
