The Rain (Part III of the Runner Series) - Reviews

great story so far . constantly updated. the character development, pacing, and world building are 2nd to none . and it's surprisingly funny

The overall story was alright. Just alright. Nothing really notable. The path of revenge, but it makes you feel rather, made me feel not satisfying at all. Even with 1000 years of life experience going through blood shed, betrayal, and feeling the intent of death during the MC years, you really can tell he does not act like his true age at all, so rather than a thousand years the age would make more sense of his true age being about 30, maybe even less. Rather weird to be honest as I read, granted I stopped at chapter 80 I believe as I just left it at that, getting some of his revenge was not satisfying towards the reader. Don't get me wrong I am not attacking the author, he writes well, grammer is good, but the ultimate premise of the story as a whole just feels like an empty shell that does not give you any reward on to reading any further. When getting the so called "slaves" for his revenge, the writing makes you feel  bland, if you came for r-18 there is hardly any in the beginning as the author just skips the scenes but puts other character scenes in? Weird right? Anyway later at the end it starts to be picked up in the category for the MC, if your coming for revenge its Fine. I recommend reading a couple chapters first to get your views on this book.  These are my thoughts and opinions on this book, not the worst I read but will easily be blotted out in time...

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I Love the Characters and their relationship.

The idea was good. The execution was terrible. The MC is nothing but a child. The plot is predictable and downright cliche. There isn't really anything that makes me want to read more

I rolled away from the chaos to swing my sword at the ax wielder's head, who was horrified at his handiwork(get it?), cutting off his head. I switched my weapon to its gun mode and shot the remaining 5 bullets at the hoe's neck, who was astonished at my mad skills. The bullet passed through it as blood gushed out like a fountain. I then lopped the head off of the guy wailing in the ground. They seem to be newbies, considering these guys don't have their aura unlocked, and how shabby they are at fighting.

"Raden... Harus membuat Maklumat secepatnya."lanjut panglima itu tegas.

"Katherine Johnson is here."

dengan segera ayah dan ibu aldo memeluk reno keduanya mencoba membuat reno lebih tabah didalam suasana duka terdengar sebuah suara bertepuk tangan yang terlihat gembira.

"Yes now would be good".

"Little girl"

Kind of like expanding your home in a game.