The Proposal (Male Margaret x reader) - Reviews

heyo crazy cronie here,review on 27/04/2021 @chap289 (released chap till date: 295)review divided in: Short reviewLong review with ratingsIMOConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) SHORT REVIEW: Pure gold! One of the best modern harem out there! And also my review is based on the previous novel, though i dont think anything really changed.LONG REVIEW: writing: 8.5/10 Few grammatical errors were there. Many might also not like the first person perspective (though this novel really did great, and i dont think third person perspective will suit this novel)update: 10/10This is newly updated, and the author promised 7/week. For me 7 per week is good for original novels.plot: 8.5/10 Sometimes plots are repetitive, but then again this is day to day life of a seemingly 'normal' high school student. So yeah repetitions are allowed!Harem? One of the best harem story i read. Yeah sometimes it feels too rushed (especially few girls in the later chap which i din like) but yeah you can't deny the satisfaction you feel sometimes when mc and the girl get together after 100s of chapters.World building... There really is nothing.. the world, till now just revolves around few places.characters: 9/10With such a big harem, i will just say author did great job in giving most of them 'real personalities'. Most of them have their own thoughts and ambitions. Even the male side charas has different personality, i really loved this thing about the novel.pacing: 8.5/10 Slow! Let me repeat once again... This is a story of a highschool boy's daily life.Yeah so authors takes the chance to explain the whole day. Sometimesnit even takes 30 or so chapters for a day, but i personally dont mind it.dialogues: 8/10At the beginning it was a little pale. Every character seemed to talk in similar manner but later chapters author really improved, and one can notice the changes.entertainment: 10/10This is a novel you can't get bored... This is a biased scoringOverall: 4.5/5  IMO:Maybe, sometimes getting a different character's view point will just be awesome (as long as it doesn't affect the plot.) CONCLUSION:An amazing harem novel! 30 chapters are enough to hook you! I am not talking about harem haters, but even if you are just ok with harem then do give this novel a try!WARNING:  *SPOILER (not exactly)*- Sometimes little bit on the darker side.- No females who have joined the mc have any visible problems with him (tho they tend to get jealous many times.)

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Just another shameless Author rating their book 5 stars. it's my first public work. I know it isn't the best, but I hope that it will get better as my experience and confidence grows!

Easy 5 star fot this novelIf you want lots of snu snu, harem, some plot, a lot of PLOT then this is for you Update stability is really good that i can say after 100 chapterSo dont wait and jump in onto the ship

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" but I don't have much time because without the main soul fragment I can't live so I will let you enter the treasure because they are not needed any more. As for entering you must find a way and I will not tell you how to enter it's against my orders ".

I tried to get her on the bed but every time I get close to her to calm her down she shatters me away. I can't bear the pain of seeing her in such condition, I don't know how she is bearing this. She begged, -"Chris.... Christian..... Please.... "

"I… I don't know what to say, this… this… can I really believe you? After all, I mean, it just has been a few days, why me? You could simply ask Notitiam… he is an information broker, of course, he should know how to speak to people a bit more than me… no, way more than me… I don't know how to talk to them without feeling awkward, uncomfortable, embarrassed… and so on. Notitiam is someone who must speak quite a lot of people, his words must be filled with tricks I wouldn't even be able to understand… he is much more suitable than me, and perhaps, after a few days, you would find him trustworthy… more than me even so."

Everyone's jaw dropped at this news. There were around 5,000 students in the auditorium that a person would have to search through in order to find the one person with a map to there dorm and none of us knows how many of one color there is. Mrs. Tanazaki says with a that half smile, "I almost forgot, you only have two hours to find your dorms. If you don't find it by then, we'll change the door locks so you won't get in until you pay for the new key. Good luck.".

"Should we also be afraid?"

A gasp of sudden realization came into him.

Sepulangnya dari tukang pangkas, dia melihat puteranya sedang bermain di depan rumah. Dia ingin tahu, apakah putranya masih mengenalnya dalam keadaan klimis seperti itu. Karena itu, dia bertanya pada putearanya, dimana rumah Pak Iwan.