This is the best kingdom building genre story I have read on this platform, so far.Now, star review:writing quality- Unlike most stories consisting kingdom building and mmorpg genres, it doesn't have any name inconsistencies, and the grammar is good. Although, there is need for some editing, as a every other sentence, especially in later chapters, have jumbled up words. I know that it sounds contradictory to the 4- star that I have placed, but the point is that this simple mistake still doesn't take away from the story and its depth.story development- I have read till the latest chapter, binge read. I am so glad that the comment I made in the first or second chapter in regard with the sects and hidden families, hasn't proven to be true. I am also very happy that there is no annoying and unnecessary young master or mistress character yet. There is no dumb unnecessary face slapping trope yet. The characters are nicely fleshed out, and yet shrouded in some mystery. The MC is not out right dumb or edgy and evil af, he has his own ideals and got some good advisors to help him. Most importantly, there is no xia country forced into it, although there are many characters taken from chinese background, at least they are genuinely helpful and not like everything that has happened on this earth, is or was done by se chinese dude, I also like the inclusion of different cultures and there famous characters. Character design- Same as above.Updating stability- As I have written- I have binge read this book, hence, I am not sure about this. Though it shows 2chs per week.World background- This is like fresh breath of air, well not entirely, but still. Instead eastern empire and xia country, it has many factions and mc and his parents are from western front, at least according to knowledge provided till the latest chapter. There are still a lot of mysteries to be solved regarding the world background and it is enthralling.Finally I hope that this story don't get dropped or go on hiatus, and the quality be maintained pr improved.
