The Primordial Dragon Artificer System. - Reviews

This has a lot of potential to become an amazing story. The few chapters I read already had me excited to read ------------------------------_------------

I dislike how the mc reacts to the situation he’s in.   Literally three generations of this dude’s family have been worked to death, to 0 benefit of any kind.  Like, is starving to death better or worse than just working nonstop until your body collapses?   Some slaves are treated better and exploited less.   However 20 chapters in he has not yet changed his situation further than ‘basically a slave’ to ‘slightly more valuable slave’.  

When you start reading it doesn't seem like a bad novel. But after 500 chapters it's always the same. The mc defeats and enemy but doesn't kill it. Then that enemy appears again and is defeated but not killed. 100 chapters later the same chatacter is defeates but not killed. And that's all about this novel. He don't kill enemies they appear again then defeat them and repite

i would definitely recommend, but that is just because i really enjoy gaming novels, but the story is nice, mc doesn’t feel op or something and there is already some character development. if you’re not sure if you want to read it just read a couple of chapter and decide if it’s worth it after :)

I can't say that I've ever read a trashier novel in my life. Other than the random and badly written translation, the story itself is executed so poorly. Just the way in which the events happen within the book is ridiculously awful. If the author put even a modecum of effort in it would be 1000 times better.

This writer is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15. He's disgusting.

Very good take on system theme , beyond the basics the history brings fresh ideias e creative character , just a more stable chapter launch rate

To be honest, the story has a lot potential. Although the theme apocalypse and the second chance is very widely used, but I think the writer did a good job here.  Unlike other apocalypse stories. The author here clearly makes mc OP from the beginning, but it does not make you bore, because in the usual apocalypse story, the mc usually has to suffer, gain strength slowly, and meet problems constantly and continue to grow until it reaches the top. Well, I don't know about others, but I'm sick of it. So I hope this story can be entertaining.

Its good so far but im still waiting for some g re ammical errors to be fixed

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Overall, the chapter structure is quite neat and organized. It was a pleasant experience for me as a reader. Additionally, the story is quite detailed, and I find myself learning a lot while reading it. Every character didn't have much exposure, but I guess that is how this webnovel is taking its path with the main character as the focus of everything. Or perhaps it is because it is a first-person type story? I don't know, but it is still an enjoyable read for me despite the moderate pace.