The Pompous Heiress Strikes Back! - Reviews

Hello! Author here, I'm currently starting to edit the chapters beginning from that start for any typos, mis-gendering, and such. There have been many kind people to point out the mistakes so I could edit it but reading my own work from the start still revealed minor ones.Anyway, there would be no changes to the story whatsoever from me doing this and this is just an update to tell everyone that I'm aware of the mistakes made and I 'm starting to correct them. However, if you still spot more, please do tell me and I will update them at the earliest.Thanks for reading and see you next chapter ^_^A comment for your thoughts or a review would really help me a lot!Discord Server Link:https://discord.gg/3JstDAVMy Discord:Sky2316#9623

hope this gets picked                                                                                                                   heh

This book has alot of potential and is professionaly writen. The grammar is superb, I would recommend this book. I am supprised more people haven't read this masterfully written book.

Man my favourite novel Fan-fic so 5 starts. I still hasn't start reading it. It was just found this In new release ranking.......................................................

I am honestly not a fan of sci Fi but this novel changes my mind. The world building is excellent and the vocabulary used is written in a good style that flows. I have to say that I am enjoying this novel thus far and i am going to continue reading further. Best of luck to you!

- Sin embargo, ¿qué? - presiono una voz masculina, pertenecía a una de las figuras centrales que hasta ahora había permanecido callado.

Days passed and Leto was getting more and more familiar with the new powers and as such also me albeit the progress was really slow and the enemy's retaliation for stealing the orb only became fiercer as time progressed.

Lo mire con enojo pero respire hondo para calmarme y pensar en que deseo debería pedir.

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Ciel: I'm a bit hungry. I'd like something sweet to eat.

The woman from the hall stood to his right, looking studiously busy with her tablet. Satan closed the door softly behind him, clutching his folder tightly. He took a deep breath, and he centered himself.

          It was a pleasant morning, the next day. The skies are blue, the birds are chirping and the flowers are so lovely. The place was astonishingly beautiful, it so nice to wake up and appreciate God's gift. I looked around and smiled, but when I turned to that direction, the smile on my lips weakens and all I could do is sighed. Why? Because from where I was standing I can clearly see them---exchanging warm smile and gazes; looking so in love with each other.