The plot collapses: All the heroines are broken! - Reviews

This is the second novel that I am writing after reading lots of villian and antihero stories because I also wanted to write one. you will definitely be surprised by this book’s new and different touch on villian genre and hopefully it will keep you entertained.

[Up until chapter 23]

Deleted my other review cause it was trash compared to what I'll say now.

Nothing needs to be said cause this is just that good.

An absolutely lovely read you have to try out no questions asked.

Author well written

this theme is very good, there are very few currently but I think it's very cool that the heroines listen to the protagonist's thoughts, the development of the story is going very well too, I'm enjoying the decision making of each character

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I READ THIS BEFORE BUT I FORGOT THE TITLE (AHHRGG SOOOO ANNOYING)

I read a similar story to this novel, but there the villain decided to give up original story and behave like a villain after 1000 restarts.. Seriously, thousand.. There were many other problems in that story.
This novel doesn't has the problem which were in that novel. Also, the editing is quite sharp here. This is a very good crisp story. Do read it

hmmm... I think the story is quite interesting, when I write this review, I've read 20 chapters
well... I don't read novels here very often because only recently have I started using webnovel, so I can't really compare it to others, but I think the the concept of heroine being able to hear the villain's inner voice (mc of this story) is interesting.
and the story line is quite interesting, so I think it's quite worth to read

I gave this thing 2 golden tickets, is there anything that needs to be asked or.

lately i kinda like a villain story where the heroines can hears the villain(mc) inner thought. and this novel is one of it. not only that, this novel shows us that inner voice getting heard by the heroines can have another implication

I've been reading a lot of villain novels lately and sometimes the dumb decisions they make just makes me want to personally kill them. Thankfully I've found the perfect villain novel. Author please come back .... it's 22nd(from my time zone ) which isn't much different from 27th.

Waiting is really torturing me.

Very different and unique book with very good realistic villainous character. writing quality very high, suspense plus story build up and background is very interesting. characters arw written properly not giving the idea that they are forced or 2d.

Great great , i very choosy in reading as i finish what i read, only read 9-10 books full here but this one was in top popular and other rankings continuosly, and it was worth reading.