The Player Who Became a Constellation - Reviews

I am revising my review thanks to popcornlol who confirmed this was completed (not hiatus, as I had thought before after finishing it). This one is a very short novel with only 101 chapters, and at the end of book, it leaves you wanting the author to tie up the loose ends. Our MC had just won the national soccer championships when he has to transfer schools. One of his old friends also decide to transfer. Anyways, the team on the new school is relatively bad, and the first part of the book is focused on shaping it up through matches to make it competitive. There's the usual trope of the pretty team manager, and the unexpected wins against public expectations. I was hoping for something like the old anime/manga "Hungry Heart" with regard to how an underdog shocks the nation, but it definitely isn't as good.

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I tried reading this cause I like system plots and it has a modern martial arts twist in it.. but daaaanng I hate how every woman in this novel being portrayed as hard to get but at the same time so easy to convince, just tell them that MC is rich, super rich, extremely rich then they become Oh my gosh I'm so in love with this guy. Acting so mad and possessive when there are other women in the picture so they immediately throw themselves at the MC.. really.. each one of these women are portrayed like this!!All women in MC's harem: "He's extremely rich, handsome and so powerful, my ideal man, but I won't let him touch me, let him drool all he wants"As a woman, I don't mind reading harem stories as long as women in the story aren't portrayed as gold digger prostitutes disguised as pure lilies.. it's so degrading.. not that being part of a harem is degrading enough

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I love this novel. Its very enjoyable. MC's and sect elders trying to benefit from eachother is very interesting. I hope this gets picked too.

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Thank you for the Adventure.  Please continue releasing more chapters.  Dont give up!  This is an amazing story thus far.  The backstory detail is phenomenal and the characher detail is so amaxing i can vividly see them

Returning the empty plate to the women near the wash basin, she glanced over the spices and supplies that they had spread out while cooking before turning to leave.

"NYURUFUFUFUFU~ Curious, curious, aren't you? Don't worry, you'll get your answers soon unless you follow me." (Korosensei)

Age,that determines the stage of happiness.One day on his way to school he suddenly stopped and started starring towards the people working in a huge construction building and wondered how these people carrying those heavy rectangle shaped red rocks,aren't they heaviley weighted?if so, how these people manage to carry.Ohh!! it's already 8:30am I should leave the place.Today,I will get to hear the results of my examination may be I can be the topper among all my classmates.Yes,he is a top student and with that excitement returned back to home runned towards his mother and said that he was the topper and asked her for a piece of cream bread but,the happy mother refused to offer him the piece of bread that she has no money to purchase.Boy,Mumma where is my bread?I'm sorry I can't give it to you as we are not having sufficient amount of money to purchase.He slowly jumped from his chair and asked his Mumma what if we are having money?shall we buy everything that we  want?Mumma replied,offcourse we can buy.But,not the goodness so earn money help the people be kind to everyone and show gratitude.That went deep into this young boy memory.The very next day he asked money to participate in his favourite technical contest but mum can't give the desired amount and the contest gone.