The path of the betrayed sky - Reviews

OVERRATED!To be short, everything is redundant, snail paced and low quality to begin with, while poor comedy seems to be the main theme.That  being said, perhaps all the flaws I see in it are because I'm not part of the author's intended demographic.

really good overall! I think it would be nice of the author to go back and correct spelling and math errors throughout the story. many comments have pointed them out so it shouldn't be too hard to locate and fix them

We have so few sports related novels being translated, but tbh, the synopsis for this one was disappointing. Hopefully it’s just the synopsis that’s bad. I’ll delete this review if it turns out better than expected.

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MC sometimes just turns into a drooling retard and let's his enemies live for no reason. Every single time they come back stronger or with more powerful backing to come **** him up. He doesn't learn his lesson. No worries though, he wastes his omni points on some random OP spell that either teleports him away or makes him Thor, either that or he drinks an OP potion that makes him invincible for like 10 seconds before turning him into a waste for a year. No worries tho he makes the dragon queen wet af and she turns him into a dragon, even after he indirectly killed all 3 of her husbands. MC harem members can't have any other potential men in their lives.Oh and MC spends most of his time fucking around instead of actually focusing on getting stronger. Like why are you throwing yourself at these ultra strong demigods with your weak ass magic? MC is portrayed as being really "smart" where only like 3 people can understand him when he talks about magic and his strategies but it just doesn't seem that way when the author forces certain actions in the name of plot, just to end up with massive plot armor for the action part of the story.

Well everyone, if you see one you had seen all..This is one of those "I can see hints" series. Where instead of hints, it actually answer mate. Hint and answer is different. But I wouldn't judge, you can call it whatever you like..We had read about ocean.. Tunnels... And now, island..

This story is intriguing.Review Proper.Writing Quality. It's a smooth read with all the narratives being clear and concise. Though there are a few g-errors here and there but nothing could be fixed by a little proofreading.Stability of Updates. Stable so far.Story Development. Fast-paced yet well-explained.  It flows smoothly and it made one dive into the story as they continue to read.Character Design. The characters felt real especially the MC, Long Chen. Even the supporting characters' stories were written well and you could sympathize to them rarely well too.World Background. Since this is a cultivation story, from the items to the way of cultivation, everything is described neatly so far. Overall if you're a fan of Cultivation Story, give this story a try and you would surely like it.

Does anyone know what happened to his sister.

thanks for reading

*Disclaimer: In DB we don't know much about the frost demon race or their planet so 80% of what I am going to say about them is my pure imagination so yea

"Makasih Om.." kataku sambil memegang kamera itu.

Nobita's closest friend is Shizuka Minamoto, who also serves as his romantic interest. They are tormented by bully Takeshi Goda nicknamed "Giant" and the cunning and arrogant Suneo Honekawa.