The Past of Flame - Reviews

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why the author is not updating?..........

Won't go into the nitty-gritty .. But if you like this novel, then you'll love 'digging to survive'.. It's portraying similar elements(infact minus the vr game theme, both are essentially the same.. makes me wonder if the remaining earthlings were separated, one sent to the underground catacombs and the other here .. but I diverge) Don't take my word for it ,as I dropped it at chapter 5... Tho im humouring it.. oh, watch out for plot holes(~‾▿‾)~

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Interesting read my friend yessireee very glad to have discovered this little treasire? its jst very awesome...everything one would want in a novel???

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There are quite a few... negatives, should we say, to this story. I'm not saying it's intrinsically bad but by stating you think the quality is there, you've opened up a can of worms. I think you've got a solid base but you need an editor and some quality time thinking over your work. I've only read the first chapter and I'm bothered by it's foundation. Most of your world background is going to come from the places your character travels to and as well, we don't have any background at first at all, even in the first chapter, on the world that the MC leaves behind. Your character design is too bland for my tastes. A character called Alex, the hero of heroes with a system, it seems too Mary Sue. At least you've made him younger, that gives him room to grow. I like that idea.The overall quality is a little subpar. I mean, it's 100 times better than most xinxia novels on this platform simply because the content is actually digestable but it could use some work. I'd suggest running over it and ironing out the kinks, for instance the constant use of the characters name. You can call him 'Alex' or use his last name, use the word boy, youth, teenager, or just not need to include his name at all.Your updates are regular, that's fantastic, I'll give you that.Overall, it's a solid novel but you have a rocky foundation. Whilst I haven't read past the first chapter, I can see the allure of the novel.

"Mora?" He turned his head, hearing the familiar voice utter his name. His eyes crinkled with light and he placed the pot down and ran over, Jumping up and out of instinct and reflex, Amo opened his arms and caught him in his arms. "Why- why are you here so early?" He asked, clearing his throat as he carefully put him down. Mora looked at his, folding his arms behind his back.

Nile walked over to the couch while scanning the room, his gaze held on the busted camera on the floor. Ollie followed his gaze.

Braxton tilted his head as he spoke. "We were worried about you." As always his words tugged at my heartstrings. The angry reply I'd been about to hurl at Tyson fell away unsaid.

Didn't make sense not to live for fun