THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE - Reviews

I love this novel so far and I just caught up after reading for 2 days now I'm so sad that I gotta wait for more chapters. I like the characters the background the system I like everything about it and can't wait to continue reading. I recommend this novel to everyone. Thank you Author for a great story I will continue to support

Here to give you a sparkling review to help boost you up friend. Keep working, keep pumping out chapters. Looks like you are well on your way! Keep on rocking! And remember, a cool transformation is always a dope thing to do for a hero :)

i love the piece it's well written and interesting continue like thtat

The story has few chapters yet but... Well!! It's a good start, i'm curious to read more!!

Is it insane that I want this story to update faster?!?!? Can it be updated faster? Like let’s say 10 chapters a day, instead of in a week??? I know it’s outrageous to ask but it’s that GOOD!!!

nice

I think most of the reviews so far which were negative were mostly on the synopsis, which I agree could do some work on but does and should not bring down the opinion of this novel in any way. From the get go, the premise of the novel feels like it's a really fresh start compared to most other common ones and there's a lot of thought provoking ideas as I browsed briefly in the raws. It's really amazing. Cant wait for it!

Hey bro, remember me? Anyway, this is a genuine review. I have read a few chapters I am in 5 or 6 but I want to read more. Really! I am not lying! This is good! However... It's not great. Yeah... its not a novel that will come in no.1. So, you have to work hard. But I must say this novel is wayy better than mine. You write better than me.. Just keep writing.. Don't Give Up. Pleaseee! I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU. I am jealous of you. You write so well. You write wayyyy better than me. There wasn't any long and boring info dumps like my novel. The MC seems genuine and well written. Still, you can never become too good. So I will give you some tips that might help you : 1. Read top novels in WebNovel (top 5) 2. Read real best selling novels like Sherlock Holmes and Harry Potter. (You can find their EPUB version online for free.) 3. Watch videos about how to show not tell. (You are already good at it still it will help you.) 4. Ask the top authors about some tips too. 5. Ask urself why isn't my novel getting the popularity I want. (Popularity as in comments, reviews, votes etc.) 6. Write, just write. Simple. Write to ur fullest. Wrong, bad, poor, unreasonable still just write. Trial and error is the best way to learn. No one is judging you. Heck no one even knows ur real name. So, just write. And when u wrote a million words u will see that u have come a long way. Just imagining this will make you get goosebumps right? 7. Believe in urself. 8. Love ur work if u don't, no one will. 9. I don't have anymore tips as I am also a newbie. Life isn't easy. Just keep pushing and u will win. Ur novel is good and good things can't remain unhidden. I believe in you. U can do it. And even if ur novel didn't do well u can always write another. U r not Shakespeare, right! No one even knows ur real name. So, just believe in ur self and push through. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU.

Of course, I'd give my work a biased 5 star rating. Apocalyptic world background ✅️Interesting Plot ✅️Good characters ✅️Action ✅️This is something I created years back and refined over time, so it is well written if I do say so myself. It is going to be quite the roller coaster. I don't want to spoil things, but feel free to ask me questions here. One thing to know is that MC doesn't mean what you think it does.

i like it very much and the story was also good

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Awesome novel ? The story is different from what I usually read so it's refreshing to find something interesting and well written. I recommend you read it and encourage the author since it's well deserved ?