The One Who Writes Existence - Reviews

The story starts well especially the bullying part. I like how the hero even though malnourished still put up a fight and year he even better the shit out of the bully.He only lost because bully friends attacked. This nice win me heart.The new chapter is amazing too. Especially the ability of time!

Story has great promise, but is simply ruined by trash translation.translation after chapter 40 is simply unreadable , it is worse than MTL.this needs a rewrite, it’s very sad as the story has great promise.Great cheat(talent), 2 different power systems martial and cultivation although the names of the levels for the martial path are confusing and the entire power system isn’t structured properly or explained(as the MC himself is as clueless as the readers and he simply fumbles Away ) which is fun to see.Sadly whatever joy i could have in the novel is ruined by the TRASH TRANSLATION.if it gets a rewrite with an actual translation instead of whatever that is, then i will read again , until then i’m out.many great novels have been ruined by Trash Translation.

writing quality - quite good for a novel on this site.stability of updates - very frequent story development - the only thing done is mostly grinding for the most part (read up to chapter 26). the level up frequency is so fast that barely anything is explored at all. it just ends up as a 1) go here, 2) kill mob , 3) level up. repeat. if i could give this section a 0 i would give it a zero.character design -up until chapter 26 character interactions are quite minimal and short given it has been mostly grinding or orders given, thus making every character seem 1 dimensional. 2 stars total. extra star for the mafia background which is different from what you normally see.world background - suffers from same reason as story development. nothing touched upon. all we know is that mc went here got legend class, went there and trained. went there to dungeon, go there to train. no point in remembering places since mc will just speed past it soon enough. its a story wiith a good premise but pacing is obviously an issue. level ups have gone by so fast that mc is past level 100 in 26 chapters and this spans only a few days since game release. perhaps it got better in the future, i wouldn't know because i am dropping this novel here. without story development or world background in terms of quests, the game is very flat and does not engage my imagination of different scenes. given that this game should span years, the fast paced leveling is broken and i dread what kind of levels will make sense years down the timeline. If you can stomache the issues or dont mind it, feel free to continue reading. i applaud you for i couldnt bear it.

Just few chapters and already addicted. The universe is so deep that you can’t help but drown into.I like the characters building and the easy way the writing style brings us this magic/necromancy/alchemist references

This is so f****ing great.                                                                                                              

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seems cool so far can't wait to read more filler song Gunter, why did you gunt my fries?I gunted them, and they were mine.What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries,And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes?Gunter, there were tears there.If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?

horrible writing quality, the story is full of bumps, everything seems to happen simultaneously.

"Do you remember anything from this place?" Charles question successfully took back Sienna's attention. Sienna started to look around the place, but no matter how she thought about it, this is only an ordinary cafe. Did this place has some kind of connection with her? She didn't know. Her memory still not coming back.

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After reading Orichimaru bit his thump and marked the contract as the contract burned signifying it completion. It seriously looked like a Devil Contract.

Skill: God's Punishment Slain, Divine Slain, God's Spell, Self Regeneration , Gate to Heaven, Speed Boost