The one who remained - Reviews

Interesting

Writing quality is bad. There are some chapter in which the author tries using proper grammer (probably with the help of some software), but a lot of chapters are just straight up horrible, and barely readable. From sentences that make sense and weird random words in places they don't belong, to flipping back and forth between first and third person perspectives and weird tense changes. It's all in there.The writing quality makes this novel hard to enjoy.Only give this a try if you're not really bothered by poor writing quality.Besides that, from what I've read, things all seem like a fairly generic xianxia novel. Nothing too special, but also not horribly boring.

Translation Quality: Is okay for the most part, but there are a few lines that do feel out of place. However, with the context of it being a trial read then it’s pretty good. Stability of Updates: I’m sure you guys know the drill by now. Story Development: I’d say don’t judge this story based on the description, because it’s not very accurate. What is true: yes, he was a Godking* and he did die and reincarnate.What’s not true: that he can’t cultivate and chose to nurture disciples instead. As far as his nine disciples are concerned; they seem to have been his disciples while he was a Godking.That said I do find the premise of this story and cultivation system to be plenty interesting. I do like the fact that the sect he reincarnated into isn’t some random weakest sect, in the weakest location, but one he had established thousands of years ago before ascending. As a result sect development is one of core plots of this novel, which is a sub genre I’m personally a big fan off. Of course it’s not devoid of the typical cliches of this genre, but again I’d say the premise of this novel and it’s cultivation system is enough to give a try regardless. Edit:*the term in the actual translation seems to differ; I’m not sure if his actual rank was an Immortal King or not, but I left it as Godking for similicity’s sake.Also I’ve rated it 5 stars because:A. It’s not been westernized.B. To counterbalance reviews made by some very biased people who haven’t even actually read the novel.

Haven't read but the synopsis is intriguing but is the summoner really a woman? Not really against it but based on the type of stories I've seen and the fact this is Chinese the woman might turn into the love interest real quick who the protagonist simps so much I hope my assumptions are incorrect though and that this would turn out quite good

The story is excellent...............................................I just hope that you don't pace it too fast..................................This story is good when you look for it as a long term story....ATB I will cheer you as a reader

I honestly can't find much negatives in this novel. The wording is awkward at times but if you just take a second to re-read you can understand what it means.Would recommend.

I will not be biased. I have read a lot of novels in my time and indeed, the starting point of this novel has captivated me in a way that most novels have failed to achieve. I do hope that the quality of writing will stay consistent throughout the rest of the chapters.Good luck, new author. I will be closely following your book eagerly.

He rolls his eyes. "Yeah yeah. But I really am sorry. I didn't mean to make you angry. I was only trying to joke around with you" he sighed.

As Tyler woke up he noticed he was in a field of flowers wile his body felt wired not just a giant head ache but his body felt different and he had something attached to his back as he tried to move and stand up by putting his hands and pushing down on the ground and lifting his body up as he looked down at his hands wile doing so and he freaked out at what he saw.

"Who are you?"

I head towards the circle with the ball, I get ready to use my quirk, My skin and flesh start to fade away, all that is left are my bones, now Instead of a 175 centimeters tall brown haired teen, stands a 175 centimeters tall skeleton, I get my stance ready, adjust slightly, and, THROW

One week after his arm was crippled , Alex become a training maniac . Every day he train in the hellish methods . It's true that in this way he'll become stronger in the shortest amount of time , but he can die if he isn't aware of his body condition .