The Omniversal Merchant - Reviews

Have not read much but from what I have read, it's a nice story overall. Though it still needs to improve it's still a good one. Good work author

I like how the author made plot to tell the education related stuff, it's hilarious to me ? I had a good laugh. Give it a try to the chapters you got for free guys! Story development and character development are 2 things you can't underestimate in novel like this.

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Well, it's pretty good..That's all I have to say honestly.. I mean the pacings pretty off at times.. and sometimes the information dumb might be a turn off. But then again it's miles better than some of those dumb novels with the reincarnation stuff. So yeah, give it a read. Nothing new or innovating, but it does good with its premise, and who knows, you might just have a good time.

Your poems are beautiful dear author!!I look forward to your update everyday.. the lines are simply superb.. it's like you can feel what I feel and you put those feelings into words..You are too good.. continue writing ????

I absolutely cannot hold the temptation to give this book a 5 star review. Without seeing this book everyday makes me feel theres ants crawling inside my body and eating my organs. This book makes me go crazy. If this book was a real person, I would simp hard on it.

It missed but Silk didn't let the flames go out. "Phoenix, I need your help," he shouted. "Crusher, hold off Strocker, use everything you've got."

Thanks for the chap. Could you at least make naruto act like how is after the war and not small genin naruto? Its almost unbearable to read with naruto acting like a wussy.Just my opnion l..

-I sounds like you already have a plan to achieve what you said?, not just the idea of it -Maruka turned to Aidan expectantly. Aidan nodded.

Once at home they were welcomed home by a loving mother, and their favorite dinner. Then went to their room for further debate on professional heroes values.

And then he saw the two of them. The moment Flagon saw the man, he knew he wasn't normal. Flagon had stolen his fair share of things. Most of those things weren't with him right now, since he didn't want to attract any unnecessary attention. Except the Star Pearl. The Pearl he was very reluctant to let go of. Flagon had a faint feeling he had seen the man with the trawler before. A long time ago, perhaps, but he had seen him for sure. And what's more the man gave off the aura of a high-rank mage. As a mage specialized in speed and stealth, Flagon could easily detect the waves a mage gave off. The man must've been weaker than Flagon, but what really surprised Flagon was the Trawler he pulled. That Trawler was something he had seen before.