The Omega's Fugitive Alpha - Reviews

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The author has done a great job carving and molding such unique and spectacular characters. And the tale itself is so well spun, It’s hard to stop reading. Great job.

TBH I really like this genre of novel. it's one of my favoritesbut Translation quality dropped greatly, It's using MTL with little a bit of editing to make it a passable read.and the most disappointing one is since the recent post is totally discarded the editing.now it's pure MTL, so I think to save your spirit stone and go read the MTL. (MTL have more chapterThat all.p.s. don't believe me? Compare it yourself.p.s.s. Use comparing program

This story is not bad, it is far from what I expected. The story is not for me at all. It is interesting for people who like stories like this, and your world building is very good. You have a nice writing style that keeps people in. The problem is the grammar, if you reread through your story, you can easily find them. But the grammar mistakes are small and doesn’t throw off the story. Unfortunately this story is not for me, but for the people is will enjoy the story.

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Good novel so far. MC isnt stupid Or an Emo loner that lust after every woman he sees. He has a system and actually thinks on which stats he should increase that benefit him instead of spamming charm. He already has a group of friends but dont worry if you think mc will expose all his secrets. Author already confirmed to me that the mc will not tell anyone about his system or share it to help. (I Really hope this stays true all throughout the story)First entertainment, mc will be streaming. Im Enjoying it so far so please Dont drop.

It might not be for everyone, but I enjoy these types of overpowered novels. I'd like to see how the MC gets through his predicament, so I hope they'll continue translating the story.

I loved this could anyone recommend similar novel where mc is focused on training and his speed is not too fast but not too slow eather of becoming a powerhouse

Dear authour the story was really good. Though u could have added some more chapers. Hope you would give us some more exiting novels like this hope to read soon love u authour. ?????????????????????????????????????????????

This is mtl, unedited, chunks of the chapters are missing too. Like usually a third to half of each chapter is missing. You’re better off finding the raw and mtl it yourself. Raw name is 诸天世界的天道, according to novelupdates.

Really good story. It's progressing nicely. A decent level of immersion. It's also easy to get a feel of the emotions of the MC especially during 18+ scenes.?

CRITICAL REVIEW Read up to current latest release 71/71It's not bad. Very lightnovelish and anime-like written story. I don't really have much to comment about it surprisingly.  There's some persona inspiration which is awesome. As for the romance, I can't tell if the mc is being oblivious or is dense. I assume the former. A complaint would be that while I did like it, the heroines seem easy to fall in love with the mc. Ngl it really seems to be resembling a tras*y isekai webnovel.  Then again it can technically be excused since it is a dating sim world... but I value realism so it bugs me. As the story progesses the mc also appears to be falling into the shoes of becoming a true generic mc. Please try and avoid that. This is a frequent occurring issue in most 'mob stories', which defeats the purpose of the mob genre. It's hard, so just try and make it so he doesn't seem generic. Another issue I've had is that the novel does seem to kinda rush things somewhat. It kinda gives off the impression of skipping/wandering around with no truly meaningful substantial progress.  An example would be when the story introduces Elicia. (Spoiler) Okay so then have an event together and then everything is just glossed over. They are friends I guess? We barely see any interactions which is different from someone like Luna who we see a lot of and see clear development of and most importantly... REASON TO CARE- that's how I express it. It's much like Isabel and Elizabeth where everything feels glossed and not substantial. They don't give me reason to care enough.  And its not enough to tell, but you must show it. Luna feels "show" while others feel like "tell".Some spoilers~Grigory is awesome but his prestige falls the further you are in the novel. Perhaps its because of my expectations for him of being like a double-edged sword. The seemingly ominpotent power he brings in exchange for something precious later along the line. Because right now, he's basically a full-on slave for the mc. I had hopes of him being a very nightmare-like being for the mc that hes forced to use. But with the tone of the story and all, Grigory is just likable and comical.Much like my other reviews, I always end by trying to ship.As not all heroines are introduced (I think), I suppose I ship the MC with Elicia since I'm a fan of tragic heroines. Even tho we barely know her.I hope this doesn't end in a harem ending!